Haha, what a great little story! *quite satisfying*

I was so focused on the emotion this story conveys that I probably missed the reason why Marceline left Bubblegum alone when she's dying. Gonna read it again sometime. This is like, lumping awesome!

Wow just wow this really felt like a story being mixed and affected by the past in a form of a diary this is by far one of the best adventure time no fan fiction story I have ever read thanks for writing it

Wait what?
I read this a while back nd yet it lacks my review?
O_o nah that won't do!
OKAY OKAY, LET ME JUST SAY THAT THIS RIGHT HERE NEEDS MORE PUBLICITY!
This story is top drawer!
Freakin' awesome piece of work I tell you wht!.yep! My work is done :D

I've only gotten to the 4th one, and I just had to stop reading. THIS, this is one of the best ones I have ever read. I also had to stop reading because I got teary-eyed. I love this so much, I'm going back to reading now.

Beautiful ending. I loved how well written your OCs are, and your portrayal out the characters from the series.

This was amazing. One of the best bubbline fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You are a fantastic author and should be incredibly proud of your work. Thanks!

you sir, are the best! the best! all the drama bombs at the end of each chapter were emotionly tough to get through, this is one of the greatest storys on , i love looking for fanfiction like these, so very well written, with very powerful morals, and strong emotion, great work, im looking forward to reading your future fanfictions :)

I loved it! Such a great plot and amazing action! You did an awesome job of expressing Astrid's feelings throughout the story. Although, I was fairly confused at chapter 13. Overall, I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of your stories!

Wow... Awesome...

This is literally ... The ... Best... Story I have ever read about bubblegum and marceline... That's all I wanted to say

The feels are strong with this one. CAN'T HOLD BACK THE TEARS

Interesting story.

Ahh finally an end to the story not quite what I expected but still brilliant

Every great story has to come to an end , not every story has a great ending. Readers will bitch some will moan for more. But still all in all it was an amazing thing to read and you pulled it off with a great ending hopefully to read more from you soon continue what you're doing because you're good at it.