Wow. Finally I got the end I've always wanted! And truly, you respected the characters and their personality. Congratulations!

I don't usually write reviews. But the reason I started reading ff is I wanted to read rewrites of character endings that I do not agree with. I shipped Laurie and Jo so much when I first read the book and watched the movie years ago. I was appalled that Laurie ended up with Amy and never believed he could love Amy more than a sister. (Although the new movie did a much better job of convincing me) I have been yearning for a story like this. So thank you for fixing that hole. But also thank you for writing it so well. It was beautifully done. Not too rushed and I could picture your great and detailed scenes in my mind. Well done. Thank you for sharing your talent! Let me know if you have anything published! I would love to support you and read more of your works.

Now this was epic. Loved how this all came together. I truly believe these two really are meant to be despite Jo’s initial stubbornness. These two are great together and loved every part of how their story should have been. You do them justice and thanks for writing this.

I loved this... The way you characterized Laurie and Jo is slightly different from the way they were in part 1 of Little Women... Laurie never had so much patience or understanding and Jo was neither a coward nor a whiny character... But still you captured the essence of the positives and negatives of their relationship so well... I'd have paid to buy this if it was the real part II of LW...
Also, you should consider publishing if you also write original work... Your storytelling is beautiful... All the best...

Ooooo whattt this was AMAZING!
Seriously have goosebumps all over! I am at a complete loss of words. I don't know how to praise your writing justly! Probably the best love confession scene I've ever read in my life and that's really saying something!
Wow. Wow wow wow. You need to transfer this to another story, an original story of your own and get it published. ASAP!

Very good! Very very good! Applause applause!

I absolutely loved it. Your style of writing was so in sync with other works of that period. You've done a truly brilliant job. I hope you keep writing. xx

This was the penultimate chapter. I just realised. Gosh, I don't want this story to end quite yet!

Laurie offering the March girls a ride had me smiling so broadly. It reminded me so much of the first book. You are an amazing writer!

I think you did the scene more than just justice. You did a brilliant job. And more importantly, you even managed to redeem Amy a little in my eyes. That definitely counts as something.

Remember that time in the first book when Laurie was sick and Jo took him some "medicine" (chocolate pudding, I think?)... That was first when I became convinced that Teddy liked Jo. So yes, I agree with his statement, that he's always been in love with Jo. :)

Once again, you've managed to channel LMA perfectly. This is absolutely incredible.

I can't help but marvel over how you've caught LMA's tenor and style. You've recreated it perfectly. Great job!

Ahhh, such a lovely start! The language you've used is amazing, and it feels real, like what our Jo could have done. Good work!

Great story well written. Love Laurie and Jo!