No matter if NaruSaku becomes canon or not, I'll still update this story and keep with it until I'm done with it! :)"

"On hiatus because of Naruto's shit ending.
Translation I wrote myself into a dead-end story hope no one notices

Tsunade and Sakura are out of character in this chapter

Viva the story's update, I love your story️️

ITS FINALLY HAPPENING FINALLY! FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY! HE’S GONNA SEE PRECIOUS SAKURA AND THEY’RE GONNA MEET KUSHINA AND MINATO AND JAHANEIWHMSHDJDHWIIWNWKSJNDNSNUWSODHDNDI ITADIKIMASU!

Sorry I’m just so happy I’ve been so impatient for this

SO this chapter is well written, flows well and was easy to read...except I feel Sakura was out of character. So before I wrote this i went to look up the timeline to see if i was completely off. So, I dont remember Sakura liking Naruto too much, but she does confess if i remember right. I believe it was more her being confused about her emotions and Naruto always being there for her. I just Dont think she was this sure of her feelings for Naruto as you make it seem.

Reason for looking at the timeline? See when the battle with PAIN happens and Hinata confesses. Im sure at this point Sakura Knew about Hinata's crush. I looked and Naruto's training, Pain attack, and leaving for the Hokage meeting all happen in about a month time.

I assume you to have been doing this with Sakura OOC in order for Nar/Sak to happen. Just feel bad for poor Hinata.

I just, if Sakura has liked Naruto for 4 years, thats pretty much since graduation at this point. They are 15-16 i think? Sakura would have taken a bit longer to get over Sasuke at least and change her feelings for naruto.

Anyway I feel bad reading at this point, but gonna try skipping ahead a bit to the time travel and see if i like that part. Thanks for writing though even if i dont finish it, i just am not a big fan of your pairing.

I just started reading this fic, but I absolutely loved this chapter and had to comment! I whole-heartedly agree with you that Sakura needed to be reprimanded by Tsunade and it was severely lacking in the manga. Probably because it was written by a guy, honestly xD But yes. Loved this chapter and I can't wait to read the rest!

Actually, Kushina might be tsunade’s first student, because she was also shown to have super strength in Road to Ninja, and destroyed naruto’s Apartment with one punch

great story!

haven't forgotten about you, please if you have it in your heart to continue, don't forget about us. This is a great story

Please update soon

Dude you literally cut off at the best part. Did you die or something? This story is the best I love NaruSaku parings.

OK, this has been good so far but honestly there's an annoying thing here. There's so much written but very little is actualy happening. Frankly, it makes this story much more boring than it should be. I'll continue reading and hope it gets better, but by chapter 12 SOMETHING should have happened. There's literally no difference between the state of things in this chapter and how things were back in like chapter 3. So my advice would be not to make things so slow. The concept is nice but if it takes too long to hook me I feel like the writing isn't planned ahead at all.

I hope it improves in chapters I read after this, because the premise is interesting. Don't take my commentary harshly, I just don't like it when a plot is standstill for so long.

I'm about to start this fic after I get off work in a few hours. I'm hoping Naruto goes back in time with Sakura (unclear how the NaruSaku ship would work otherwise). Also, *please* bring this back so I have more to read once I catch up!

Dont do this to us i must jnow what happens next

u a bitch