AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PLEASE MANE MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZPLZPLZPLEEEEEEASE

Thanks!

cute :3

Great 1st Chapter.

loved it amazing!

This is a good way to cap off a night. Reading through fun little stories like this.

quite impressive at 3 AM, the story is good and I enjoyed it as much as the previous chapter. Also you managed to do the characters perfectly, especially during the chase between Sly and Carmelita.

I love this story, I have all the Sly Cooper games and I enjoyed reading this to see the both having a good time without shooting and running :P

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. UWAAA
I ran into it today, and am SO glad I did. This was just so fluffy and adorable!
You capture the characters so well 3. Thank you so much for writing this

That was really cute! You did a great job! :)

D'aww, that was really cute and sweet! Wow, you packed so much emotion and detail into everything. The insights into the characters' thoughts and feelings were wonderful. The descriptions were great, and all the dialogue (as well as reactions, haha) were perfectly in-character. I really loved it!

Great story :)

Brilliant! This story is a joy to read and I think you should label it as one of your personal best. Chow!

Awww, I love it! It's adorable, but I love the fact that the characters were in character and not OOC. Gotta love Sly and Carmelita fluff! .

I applaud you for taking the time to write out descriptive scenes, detailed action, and insight into the thoughts of those in your story. Sly and Carmelita both seem quite in-character, though Carm seems to accept how she feels about Sly at the end of the first chapter a lot more easily than I would have thought. But that's just a minor thing, and for the most part, this is a solid and heartwarming bit of SlyxCarmelita fluff.

In addition, I'd like to give kudos to you for trying a plot a little more original than a simple "Carmelita-chases-Sly-then-gets-wooed-by-him" scenario, or the post Sly 3 concept. Here, we see how an energetic and active raccoon like Sly would get a little stir-crazy from being cooped up in his bed; how his feelings for Carmelita lead him to put himself in harms way; and how Carmelita herself feels when she finds her sworn quarry under the weather...and trying to help her all the same.

The ending, in particular, was particularly sweet...not just because Sly's little collection of memorabillia is a counterpart to Carmelita's collection of his calling cards, but also because it shows just how much Carmelita's surprising decision to steal a kiss meant to him. They didn't exactly fall into each other's arms, but our favorite star-crossed duo made some progress in their own way. :)

All in all? A good fic. I fave it happily.

I liked the ending, it left me wanting just a bit more which worked out perfectly! You have a great writing style, it flows nicely and isn't too wordy while giving good amounts of detail. Bravo for impressing me, that is hard to do.