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Person chapter 12 . 5/21 Did not feel any rush the story is great but your more important I hope you feel better |
PerpetualDusk chapter 12 . 4/7 I am happy to have stumbled upon this story and read it, it is an absolutely great read. I hope you are doing well after all these years, and I would like to say that you have written an amazing story :) |
Ghostmorningg chapter 12 . 1/1/2017 Are you still going to update? I love this story sooo much... (Too lazy to log in) |
Bekka chapter 12 . 12/11/2016 I love this story! Stay strong️ |
Kiri Natsumi-Tetsuya chapter 12 . 10/29/2015 CANT wait to read more |
Storm Low chapter 12 . 6/29/2014 You are amazing. You have managed to keep your 'addiction' (for lack of a better word) under control and I know how hard that is because I am struggling with it myself. I admire your determination and your writing isn't as bad as you think it is. Keep it up! :D |
Firework's Feelings chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 Great chapter ! |
thedragonballs chapter 12 . 11/3/2013 Love this story please write more you are amazing do not be hard on yourself, if you can believe in yourself then you can finish anything you can you - |
Ardianna Keeper chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Uh review, hmm, well a thanks for writing I guess, I'm dyslexic too. So this carries more weight for me then it would for the average person. Keep up the good work, this is more a Tony I can identify with. |
LaPirataAna chapter 12 . 8/18/2013 Oh, don't even worry dear! You take as much time as you need to get back in shape, until you're ready to continue writing this story. I'm sure I'm not the only one here who would wait as long as it takes for you to update again. :) I am terribly sad to hear that your grandfather had died, as I can't even imagine what I would do if that happened to me. I'm also sorry to hear that your junior year did not go as well as planned, and I only hope that your senior year is better. (As it should be, being your last year and all). I'll be wishing you good luck over here in Cali, for when you go back to school, for gathering your strength again, and for anything else you may need/want a little boost. Take care, and keep your head up! :) |
anime-penguin07 chapter 12 . 8/17/2013 Take as long as you need. I understand that everything always seems to happen at once and it just gets so overwhelming. I'm sorry about your grandma, I lost mine about a year and a half ago. I know that whatever you write it will be awesome! Can't wait! :) |
Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 11 . 3/1/2013 I thought they covered the love thing already. Cuteness though. I was surprised Fury did that. Surely he would have more experience with dealing with emotionally compromised individuals, but whatever. He got the team involved so I'm glad. |
sherlocknessmonster chapter 11 . 2/5/2013 Hi I don't normally leave reviews but I just wanted to say I have really genuinely loved reading this story. I found the plot line and characterisation brilliant. I just also wanted to say that, although obviously everyone is different, I found the way you described Tony and his emotions and reactions was very realistic and readable. Just one last thing I promise! I also wanted to say that I really admire you for being strong enough to take yourself away from a situation that you know might cause you to relapse and also for having the willpower not to whilst writing such a potentially triggering story. Once again, loved the fic and I'm very happy for you! X :) |
niewypowiedziane chapter 11 . 1/13/2013 I find your story a bit OOC, but I wholeheartedly approve of this kind of OOCness. The dialogues sometimes are not very smooth and they could be much easier to read with some polishing and a few commas here and there, but doesn't change the fact that you write emotional hurt/comfort perfectly. I just loved how scared and freaked out Tony was at the thought if therapy, it fits perfectly with the kind of personality he has in your story. Also, the team's support even though they don't seem to understand much of why's and how's (save Bruce) is endearing. I was only sad for Rhodey being an ass because he is one of my favourite characters, but I can see what you wanted to do here and it's all well-written in the end. I hope that the issue of dyslexia will be addressed a bit more in the future (I don't know, during therapy? or someone learning about it, maybe Bruce?), as it's a very interesting twist that I'm always happy to explore. I understand the problem with triggers and I'm very happy that you're over it now, take care 3 |
anime-penguin07 chapter 11 . 1/3/2013 I can't tell you enough how much I love this story. I don't think its "unrealistic" to quote your other reviewer. I think it's adorable and endearing. You can really feel like your in the room with them and feel all the emotions they do. It says something about you as a writer that you can evoke that from your readers. I can't wait to see where you take this story! You are an awesome writer and an awesome person and I respected your decision to go on hiatus. I hope that things are going okay in your life and that things are starting to look up, much like in Tony's life. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep writting! |