This was cool.

good story

That was fun! Well written.

Oh Man That Was Pretty Funny! Go SHAWN! NO ONE Can Find Callen! God He's Awesome! XD

& I'm Really Curious As To The Time He Ran Into Special Agent Gibbs! You Gotta Write Something About That If You Already Haven't! XD

Shawn ran in Gibbs…. I bet that went well… *snicker*!

:(0 Good job!

omg u should totally make another where gus likes kensi xD

What happened with Shawn and Gibbs? Someone please explain...

Awesome! Do we get to read about him meeting Gibbs?

I LOVE IT! Thank you for a great story! Maybe they can meet up again and Shawn & Deeks can have a competition involving their great hair!

That was one of the best cross-overs I have read! Even if it was super short, you made up for that ten fold by having a totally kick $$ plot!

I love that you brought Nate into the story. He is by far my favorite charater on NCIS: LA, and I haven't watched any season beyond the first for fear that I will find the show extremely lacking with his loss. I was so excited when Nate's name appeared... Most stories fail to include him due to him only being a main character for the first season, as I mentioned before.

I also like how you have captured Shawn. He's one of those characters I don't dare try to write for because I worry that I won't do him justice. But, you have managed to portray both he and Gus in a very similar light to as they portrayed on the show.

Also, can I beg you to write a sort of sequel to this? Or, actually, a prequel? I've read several Psych x NCIS crossovers, but I haven't been very pleased with any of them. I'd love to see how Gibbs' reacts to Shawn.

Anyway, back on track. This was a fantastic story, and the fact that you managed to correctly combine two very different shows your talent as a writer. I also must admit that your style of writing is incredible. Even though it's a short story, I have to say that just adds to it.

Continue writing, and you can bet I'll continue reading.

Heh. This was both cute and actually in character. Loved it.

...right about agent Gibbs please :D

Ran into Gibbs? Oh, that can't be good. Anyways, I loved this story! Though short, it was still awesome!

Loved it. Really, your Shawn is just perfect and hilarious ! If you re-write for the NCIS LA or Psych fandom, I'll read it !

- Nouka