Aww! This is so sweet! Can you finish it? Pleaseeee? :)

This is something new and good. Deep and...well life.
I will say that you should continue this.

SOO GOOD! Can you give me like... a visual picture of how Charlotte looks like? :) Awesome story! Keep going! :D

Please continue this story... I can already tell that you are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to see what will come, please continue!:)
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Haliston

Why did he do that to her?

This is actually quite good. I hope you keep updating it.

The story is very interesting and well written.I think it would be great if they develop a serious and intense bond.
Hope you update quickly!

I can't get enough of this story! There aren't enough John Blake fics out there, so thank you!

I like the darkness of this story, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Ahh loving this do far! You're descriptions are at times are quite beautiful, the language does just draw you in. There are some occasions where you have repetition of words in sentences but thats just minor and can be fixed with a quick read over.

Anyway, look forward to reading more! Genuinely a little gem that I've found.

oh my goodness, more please!

I'm liking it :)

Have I told you this is amazing? Because it is. Like, I can't even put into words how much I love this story, and it's only chapter 2! Love the originality and there's just something so captivating about the way that you write that makes me forget everything around me as I'm reading.
I kinda wish the chapters were longer but I'm not gonna complain as long as there are updates :) Can't wait until the next chapter!

I'm happy that you're continuing this. It seems like there just aren't enough Blake-centered stories, which makes me very sad. I'm excited to see where this story is going :)

I really like where you're going with this story so far! :) John seems realistic for once, something a lot of fanfics have a problem with, so good job! Keep going!