| Reviews for Unseen Traitor |
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SUBJECTSLASH chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 Still no update? |
equestria girls chapter 3 . 8/30/2014 Please update this I can't wait. I need to know what happens next! |
Zancudo Fiend chapter 3 . 12/19/2013 It's been at least a year and this story hasn't updated!? What the hell bro this is a good story! Suffering from writers block or something? |
momo7902 chapter 3 . 12/25/2012 OMG! I've missed your awesome stories dude (lady person dudette yep)! Nice to see you're back. Great chapter, loved it! Please write more! |
Call of Duty Gir chapter 3 . 12/24/2012 Merry christmas :) I'm just stayin up all night probably, gonna watch dance step revolution on xbox most likely, since I just got it. Remember me, lol? I got an xbox account, so if you still have xbox, can I add you? I only have like 10 or 5 friends :( awesome update, its a christmas update :D |
Trainalf chapter 2 . 9/3/2012 Well worth the wait! Interesting turn of events. Though the question remains: coincidence or framing? |
momo7902 chapter 2 . 9/1/2012 good job again I understand what you're goin' through with school and all, mines started too. I got like eight classes and they all gave me more than two pages of homework to do, so i've barely had time to work on my stories too. But either way, good job (again) this chapter is pretty good, poor frost, and I hope you have time to update :) |
xXxFrostBitexxXX chapter 2 . 9/1/2012 Oh shit is gonna get serious in the next chapter lol :P Sandman you better not do it or I will...not...uh...give you this cookie? I dunno -.-; I'm much better now but It's still hard for me to run (I wanted to sign up for Track this year in school) so yea...not good for me really right now-.-' But thank you A lot of people in my family were getting sick from it so I guess it was just a bad luck summer eh? Can't wait for more! |
StormyNight108 chapter 2 . 9/1/2012 Ah, haha. I just had the impression that it was Frost's first mission. But anyway. IT'S THE GUY HE BUMPED INTO AND GAVE THE FLASHDRIVE THINGY TO. *rage* I just... Don't even... Well, I can't say I didn't see that coming, because of the summary. But still, D: Ah, I won't ask anything. I don't want to spoil anything. XD |
NobodyEpic chapter 2 . 8/31/2012 Yep two Nobody's...but you were the first nobody! Get it? 'Cause your na...ok I'll stop. That was bad...anywho great chapter! It actually clears my confusion up! And how could they blame Frosty? Just 'cause he can hack like a boss doesn't mean that he's a traitor! Even though the evidence is against him. Update soon! |
momo7902 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012 Nice story, you're off to an awesome start! I'm honestly pumped 'cause your last one was really good, so I'm hoping this one is gonna be awesome too (I bet it is)! Please update soon! :D |
Lt. Jay Chiuraya chapter 1 . 8/26/2012 Why did you deacribe Grinch much like Gaz? Amazing story bro, keep updating :) |
NobodyEpic chapter 1 . 8/5/2012 Yea it's just a little confusing. Great nonetheless, but confusing. And I can't wait to see what happens next! Like to why they think(thought?) that Frost is/was a terrorist. So excited! |
DustMan chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 Epic epic epic epic epic epic EPIC! Can't wait for the next chapter... Lol, did I mention epic? |
xXxFrostBitexXx chapter 1 . 7/28/2012 Sweet :) please update soon, I'm sitting at home with walking phneumia and this gave me something to do :) can't wait for more. I love Frost fanfictions |