this was cute. good job

Hello lad! I am definitely loving this story, and I think it is amazing. A different story all together but extremely well done so far. I hope you would one day complete it.

SOOOOO CUTEEEEE *dies*

Please make more chapters

uh was is jst me or the transition from yukio being jealous of rin to yukio loving rin more than a brother. sorta. abrupt? or maybe I'm just dumb. so dumb that i don't know where envy/longing fits into romantic love?

PLEASE CONTINUE

Oh this is so adorable! Please do more!

Oh. My. Gods. This is exactly what I needed to read after an eight hour shift at work.
*fangirling* ASDFGHJKL!

*faints*

-DF

I really look forward to reading more of this. this is very interesting

Come on when r u undating this. I am starting to lose interest 'cause your taking do long to undate the story. So please please undate very very soon it is a really brilliant story.
Thank you.

seriously thinking about getting an account just to add this to my favs.

Ithank you for finishing the stories alo of people start a story and never finish it, and the stories are really good

I love the plot and the idea of this story. There are some problems with grammar and punctuation, though. Also, why are the lines split up in the middle of sentences?

I can't wait for the next chapter! You did a really good job keepin Rin and Yukio in character and it looks like you also did your research in psychology. I hope you keep going with your fic.

Oh how I love my precious children. They must be protected at all costs. HHHNNNGG I love this so much, you really have talent to write. Can't wait to read what happens next, my poor baby Yukio 3