I wished you wrote more for this story

Wow, poor Ryan. I wish you had followed up with Castle or Jenny helping him

Awesome story! I love the back story you gave Kevin. It fits so well and how he's basicly saying everyodys got a past, but some of us keep it close to our chests. Well done, I look forward to more of your work.

Aw maaaaaaan you HAVE to continue with this! I want to see Kevin come to terms with what happened and he, Beckett and Esposito make up! PLEASE write more!

That was really great. I loved Kevin's backstory and the detail you wrote it in. I could just picture it all happening as he described it. And I really liked the parallels of Kevin and Beckett, with both of them probably having someone out there waiting to get them, but each handling it differently. I'd love to see a follow up where we see Kev's ex partner after him or something. But as a stand alone story this was really good.

This was quite well done! Would love for you to continue it or do a follow up/sequel. Keep up the great work!