| Reviews for Trust |
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   Kyrial Arthian chapter 3 . 8/15/2016 Ooh, how nice to see an update! Poor Johanna is never gonna get grandkids. XD And Dawn described Lucas just how I always imagined him! |
| shiroyuina chapter 2 . 12/4/2015 Love it! Update more if you have the time but not too long! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2015 Nice read. |
| EHGIUSTHGIUHTG chapter 2 . 10/27/2013 PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS HECK THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I FUCKING LOVE IT |
| bogey654 chapter 2 . 10/21/2013 Wow. This is fantastic. First, the description. Issues I often see in fanfiction is either too much description (thereby boring the reader) or not enough. You've hit the mark just right. The interactions are excellent too. The only criticism I have is that your story seems to be heading on the route of the overdone 'sudden confession.' Then again, that's a personal peeve. I sincerely hope you continue this. It is an excellent piece of work with momentuous potential. Good luck! |
| Unease chapter 2 . 10/3/2013 Oh wow, I stop following Pokémon for a while and look what happens! A nice cute fic! Well written and perfect, I really want to read more! :) |
| TheChiaroscuro chapter 2 . 10/1/2013 IAwwweh, that was so cute and fluffy. XD |
| jk1276 chapter 2 . 9/30/2013 Whoooa you finally updated second chapter! I really enjoyed reading and I found my self smiling whole time! I hope you write more chapters quick! |
| Phantomhive07 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 i wonder what she'll say? please continue this seems like a very interesting story and has alot of potential! |
| reidun chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 AWESOME! |
| RED TIGER SKUNK chapter 1 . 8/18/2012 nuuuuuuu! continue damn u! |
| Chikaon08 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012 Very nice start! I didn't even know it was a continuing fic so that was a nice surprise. Very well written although I do agree with the other reviewer to use quotations instead of apostrophes for dialogue. Other than that, I really like where you are going and look forward to more :) Good job! |
| The Last Poison Apple chapter 1 . 8/6/2012 Heheheh this was good. I liked it :) It had nice touches of humour thrown in, so good job there! I'll be looking out for more! |
| fanficforever66 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012 Heyy I'm excited to read this GirlPowerShipping story! It has a lot of great potential but you asked for suggestions and I have one. It's just a little thing but when you have quotations it would be best if you used quotation marks instead of apostrophies. For example, the last quote: 'Yes, please!' should be written, "Yes, please!" Just a little thing that kind of bothered me, but keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more! |
| Vaynard chapter 1 . 7/27/2012 Oh, nice story! Most Cynthia x Dawn stories are M-rated and there Cynthia is such a sl*t... lol But, I think Cynthia is waaay older than 21. I think she is more than 25... the age gap is the most interesting fact about this shipping, IMO Keep up the good work! Best regards, Vaynard |
