You're going to continue this right?

Hardcore...that last line...O_O no words for it. That was impressive. I feel like I just got hit by a sunami. Dang. (: I like it! Fav'd!

Is this going to be continued? Please do!

Is this going to be a multi-chapter fic?

Ooh this is good! Poor Peter! I loved this movie. There wasn't enough Peter/Jerry in it for me, might be why i'm writing my own. You really twisted the gut with this one. Very well written, thank you!

OMG ! Poo Peter . How old was he ? He unwittingly has allowed a monster to enter into his place . It was eerie to watch Jerry getting closer to the innocent child . It was a mixture of cynicism and wickedness never before seen .
I never understood why Jerry not ended up the kid on that fateful night . He had every opportunity to do so . The frail child was not match or strong enough to keep him safe from a keen sense of smell and thirsty evil being .
Update soon .