I'm very sorry to hear about the death of your friend, and I hope you find some peace in whatever manner you can. As for the story, I think it is very good, and I hope someday you decide to finish it. I'll check back in after a while.

I'd love a sequel, it's a great story, I'm sorry about your friend

I really like your writing and really hope you do continue the sequel

This was good but pretty heavy stuff, would you consider changing the rating of the whole story to M?

Good

what the hell. Jackie could have screamed for help. If Donna was nearby as it's shown here, she could have prevented all this. taking off clothes in drunken haze is a very , you don't strip off your clothes in a matter of seconds. if this was rape, I don't see signs of struggle. only suffering in aftermath

WTF. he raped Jackie?

No! No! No! No Hyde and Donna! Not okay!

Omg. I' . that. was .so intense. Holy wow.

Thanks for letting us know about the sequel here too! I'm really excited to read it! I'm sure it’s gonna be awesome!

Till then keep up the very wonderful work!

Wow! What a very powerful epilogue! I'm really so sorry that I didn’t get to read it sooner but honestly a part of me is a little glad that I waited because reading this just makes me more excited for the sequel that is now up!

The details and descriptions that slowly painted the picture of Eric in his terrible and heartbreaking state were wonderfully done. This line especially I thought was really awesomely written “Circles under his eyes were like marks on a calendar, representing every single night he lied in his bed restless and sleepless.”

So sad to hear how all of this is effecting all of Eric even his appearance but really who can blame him? And his words on he phone about needing a lawyer were such an excellent way to end the story. It’s making us wonder who he was talking to and seeing that Eric is no longer just blaming himself, he doens;t want to go to jail, he wants a chance to make things better with not just himself but between his friends and family too.

BTW did I mention already how much I loved the way you kept Eric’s identity such a secret until the very end? Excellent writing there! :D

Terrific work once more! I really enjoyed reading it! This story has been such a terrific ride and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us in the next one! Take a bow on a job very well done! I’ll be reading the sequel soon! Till then keep up the great work!

I have got to say, you are an incredible writer. In my recent years, I have become someone who doesn't cry easy, and THIS, this had me close to tears for multiple chapters. I will definitely read your sequel whenever it comes out

Saw it coming. Donna. Hate Donna. WTF IS WRONG WITH HER. Hyde was effing distraught and didn't understand why Jackie was being distant. But Donna? She knew. And what did she do? WTF YO. but yea, emotional shit this fiction is.

Holy... I think this is my favorite chapter so far because of all emotion. I'm so glad everythig is out in the open now, with red, Hyde, kelso and fez finding out. I expected hydes response and understand his hurt, especially because he's had to stick through a year of Jackie being distant and his best friend being gone. I also have a soft spot for Eric since it wasn't technically his fault. Looking forward to see how this all unfolds.

Kitty!? I can't believe it. It must be so hard for her to be reporting Eric. I'm torn here. I know it was the drugs fault that he did what hendi but for Jackie's sake, I want some justice.