Intensely haunting and disturbing...from end to start there's something so terrifying yet compelling about this fic, it's like you just can't stop reading.

Poignant and very creepy. kuddoes!

Great and very touching story!

Wow. Very intense. You kept the personalities of Golding's characters very intact through out your story and it was very disturbing and brilliant to read. Not what I expected at all and that's the best about a story.

Great re-write to one of my favorite books, you did great with Ralph's muddled emotions and fears.

MLynnBloom

Amazing, just... incredible. Beatiful, frightening, perfect tone and pace, and wonderful characterization. Incredible work.

When Lord of the Flies is good, it's very good, and this is the best i've read. Description very effective, breakneck pace maintained throughout, ending terribly poignant. Characters good, in fact i'm amazed so few people have reveiwed it.

Damn. This is good!

Wow, that was a really good fic. I liked it a lot. Write more!