Reviews for Watermelon
Crummy Guava chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
This is one of my absolute favorites! I hope you write more some day (:
AnnaSimi chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
loved it. really well writen
S.A. Davis chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
really well written!
Hallow17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
This is just... wow. Its hot and flippn amazing. Just amazing. Great job man, great job.
CherrySlushLover chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
You should really write another story...
And that's all I'm saying! :D
lessthan83 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
this is simply amazing
wolfpackof1 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
THis was awesome
Quebeckany chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
*Jaw Drop* Dammit. Now whenever I eat watermelon, I'm gonna think about this ... Oh well, no loss there :3
Candy Butcher chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
0.0 This was so awesome. I love that it was well written, that Adrian was amazing (as always), and that Sydney was actually eating something delicious.

It also made me go write my own Syndrian story. Stories that make me want to write are always the best :3
LGP chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
That was really great! It's hard to write a sex scene without getting too "romance novel-y" and you manage it very deftly :) You should write more stories! :)
bookworm1223 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
It was amazing! I loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
WOOW love it ..please write more Sydrian fic ...
Miss Rhine Belikov chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
ok i had chills ive never read a story of Sydrian like this! they never took it far enough to be like this! CHILLS!
eveningstar1996 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
loved it! please write more sydrian lemons :)
Lorrtaine kearin chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
wow. that all I have to say.
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