Reviews for Expanding Horizons
Syphon01 chapter 19 . 10/31/2013
well the shadows got there own homeworld glassed.
What a pity.
I can't wit for round two against the Vorlons.

And Loren has decided to show himself.

I'd bet that the Minbari are worried now they are no longer the eldest of the youngest.

I wonder if the Brakiri have a similar term to bend over and kiss you arse goodbye.

nice update more please
Arewin chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
Awesome fiction, can't wait for more :)
Keep it up
ender13sfd chapter 9 . 9/30/2013
An excelent story!
Thank you for sharing it.
A word of critisizsm
I think that the b13 were overpowered) and the vorlon underpowered.
Where did they get their emmo?
Transk53 chapter 12 . 9/21/2013
This is very good so far. Enjoying the read :)
Transk53 chapter 11 . 9/18/2013
In answer to the two camps, I am sticking around :) I am really liking this :thup:
Inoeth chapter 19 . 8/22/2013
A truly brilliant chapter, both showing the Brakiri/Drakh invasion and the Hegemony's surprise counter attack against the Shadows and Z'ha'dum itsef. I'm actually surprised that the Hegemony didn't try to destroy the entire planet itself- Teraton strikes could be and seem to have been enough to shatter the surface of the planet, but, tow in some planetoids large enough that once they destroy the defense, there would be nothing to stop it and a big enough 'rock' would crack the entire planet in half... There is also the potential to use an Alcuburrie drive as a way to destroy a planet- given that one of the flaws is that it grabs all matter within the bubble and when it returns to realtime, that matter would be going very, very fast...

I assume that's Lorien calling out from the core of Z'ha'dum.

I look forward to seeing how things turn out at Z'ha'dum with all those first ones and the following war between Humanity and the Brakiri/Drakh. Depending on Shadow/Drakh plauges, and how well hidden the Drakh are, it could be a very long and bloody war with million or even billions of deaths or it could be a very shot (but still very bloody) war.
Sanjiyan chapter 19 . 8/20/2013
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RoyalTwinFangs chapter 19 . 8/9/2013
Very nice.
ShadowCub chapter 19 . 8/9/2013
Love the battle description, but the one on the B5 station could have been stated as being observed by a reporter or Terran naval personnel.

So they woke up Lorien? He is so fucking useless, to just sit around for millions of years watching countless races get destroyed and he wont do a fucking thing.

They should have blown that world up with him on it, if the rest of his race was this useless no wonder they are all dead.

Really liked the update, and the Dilgar finds that karma will always get you.
southern-reader chapter 18 . 7/7/2013
Sorry but...boring!
Ari989 chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Good stuff! I'm looking forward to seeing how the Terrans perform in the wars to come and how much further their actions alter the galaxy from the B5 canon. Keep up the writing! Until next time!
Selias chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Brocat... a Dilgar (cat) who's a bro?
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Very nice. Update soon.
ShadowCub chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
Idiots, nobody gives away that much just to be friends!

The Terrans really should have kept better control on their tech, they and the Centauri.
Selias chapter 6 . 6/29/2013
No "facts" about The Stig?
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