I like your play on the facts.
Sadly, they only strive for hatred :(

Holy shit this good!

I love this dark story, thank so much author. So good work.

Nice... not too strongly sex scene but it will do. I wish there's a countunity for this where zero fall for kaname as hard as kaname wants zero.

Poor Zero! His life got messed for that bitch! D:

Wow, this was great. Not understanding the complete status though. Does not sound complete at all. Still really good though!

tbh it has been a while since I have read VK fics , so forgive me if my review is kinda crappy. *sweatdrop* I really liked this fic, of course I can get how Kaname's possessiveness and dark side some times get out of hand even without him noticing . scenes figuring him and Zero had been kinda vivid the way you've written them and that was what I liked about this the most.
hope you keep the good job up.

Nice story! O.O I was like really onto it and missed my tution T.T''

Nice! So dark and awesome! I was wondering at the whole Kaname planning everything part. wondering if he said that to make Zero angry or if he really did all that. Anyway, nice installment!

Dark and twisted Kaname is delicious!
And, yes, please, publish more! (Though I find Mpreg a bit disturbing...)

i really like this story, and i wish that Kaname would use Zero for something greater other than Protecting Yuki, i mean...
i really dislike Yuki, but I LOVE YOUR STORY XD
can't wait to read more xD

loved this

Oh, this was truly a beautiful piece of writing! I really like how Kaname decided Zero's fate from the very beginning, how all that transpired - Shizuka's rage at the unjust murder of her partner, her desire for revenge, the horrible deaths of Zero's parents- how everything went exactly as Kaname planned. And the fact that almost nobody is aware of the fact that Kaname is controlling people like puppets, that he is indeed a true mastermind of manpulation and that even Zero, although he hates all purebloods and vampires in general, isn't aware of the extent of Kaname's machinations, doesn't even imagine that Kaname is the cause of his terrible circumstances... this is certainly an incredibly fascinating concept. What a lovely and actually quite possible twist to Kaname's personality, it gives him more of a dark, ruthless edge.
Anyway, your writing style is lovely, I enjoyed this very much and hope to read more from you in the future!

BTW I'd love to read more of Unholy Matrimony! And I sort of like Mpreg, at least when it's done right and not in a totally ridiculous way. Well, I#m certainly intrigued to see what you'll write next! ;)

Oh my fvck, I think you just turned me on. Damn this was hot. It was sexy, dark, amazing and goddamn mouth-drooling. Nosebleed, man. There were times were I caught myself holding my breath and inhaling deeply. Shet ))

Kaname's possessiveness was so raw and unadulterated it gave me chills. Their desires were practically bestial I had to pause and take a deep breath so that I wouldn't suddenly react aloud and alert the people at home with me that I'm reading...things. Heh. You heard that bang? That would probably be my head slamming itself on the table. Too good. Kaname's twisted thoughts and Zero's rebellious streak just to give in to his needs just made it all the better!

I swear, your descriptions gave me a clear picture of how the events unfolded. My brain went to overload. I can't really say I have any complaints. Though let me just damn the world for making them enemies forever.

Seriously, this makes me want to bite someone as well! I wouldn't care what gender they'd be )) Thanks for making a great story!

P.S. Lol, yeah, just saying, I'm not actually ShadowHarts. Haha! I hacked my friend's account to review. Name's Cypher, Cy for short :). Don't bother looking for my fanfiction account since I don't have one XP I have a fictionpress though...lol the link's in Shad's prof XP Well yeah, Cyah! I think I'll read more stories from you!

Wow...this was so dark and incredible! Wow...my lack of imagination and creativity with my words is evident, correct? XD First off, congratulations on your baby! I hope things are going well and sorry the pregnancy was rough. Thank goodness for BlackenendWing to be there for you. This story's incredible and it really plays with Kaname's thoughts in an even more twisted way than the actual series does. I can't wait to read another Kaname/Zero fic.