I’m glad I watched Death Note. Thanks for adding that in it I probably never would have watched it. I still hate the ending though.
Ok the outfit was a dead giveaway but then she added kawaii and he STILL didn’t get it.

Ahhhhh. Me and Gray have the same idea. I want to have an art related job

This is one of my favorite chapters. I usually hate Romance, but you as well as other writers, don’t put to much or to little and they make it beautiful.

Why the fuck are you embarrassed, Natsu? Lucy’s the one sticking her neck out there for you!
You ARE a horrible Father. AWFUL is more like it.

I could NOT stop smiling while reading this chapter. I really liked it.

THIS is why I can’t stand Natsu in his fic. He wants to control Lucy’s life. He’s making her give up what she lives to do. She won’t be able to hang around her friend that often either. I got really sad during the video too. But...all in all...great chapter.

Yeah! You sure told him Lucy! I still hate it that Natsu is trying to change Lucy. It’s annoying. Let her do what she wants, man.

...I feel angry and sad now. Lucy kicking Angel while she’s down like that reminds me when Acnologia stomped on Irene’s body even after she was dead...poor Erza...

I hate when people make Lisanna an over dramatic bitch. That’s the only thing I don’t like about this story.

Yeet! Back at it again!

Good story, don't like mest part through, despite how you feel, it's still pedophilia

I hope u publish a book too. When of the authors I read did that with a story of hers and now she has like 6 stories published. I very much enjoyed reading ur story and can’t wait to see more!

Mest is his REAL name. U know that right? Doranbolt is a cover up name for the Magic Council (so glad Jackal killed them)
I hate Mest and Wendy together. Wendy is WAY too good for him. Plus far too young. And honestly, she could do better. I like Wendy with Chelia or Romeo.
Wow. I like ur version of Mest. Doesn’t view Wendy as an object (like how most men do these days unfortunately). He’s smart. Nice. I hate Natsu right now.
Man. Wendy’s a smart little shit. Good for u kid.
NOPE. I HIGHLY doubt she will get taller.
OMG! I loved that last paragraph! Sooooo funny

...I liked it. Especially with what happened with Wendy and the game parts.

I love how u made Sting. He’s HILARIOUS AS FUCK! Loved this chapter