This was a wonderful long read - I loved it. Monster is one of my very favorite eps, and is a favorite point of mine to diverge from the canonical path of the show, so that made it even more perfect. Well-written, with lots of McSwarek affection... excellent!

Omg! Couldn't get enough of this story, loved it, great job

Such a well written, easy read. Loved it.

Really enjoyed the epilogue! Would love to read more from you!

Incredible story! I just loved it beginning to end never a dull moment!

Loved this. You really got the characters down, especially the dialogue. Great story xx

Loved the "pissing contest" and how cocky Zach is- just like his uncle. Brilliant!

Enjoyed this story very much :)

Loving this story. Really funny and right in point you write swarek and McNally perfectly. Love how you've brought Sam's family into it. Well done xxx

This has been an amazing story, I have actually read it all again from the beginning, I started off intending to just skim through it to refresh my memory, but got so engrossed in it again I couldn't stop, and I think probably a few months down the line I could actually read it again, brilliant job, look forward to more stories from you.

Ooh his nephew. Eek!

Awesome story

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Lol loving this story. Bring on chapter 12 x

Thank you, for this amazing story. You kept the characters real. And I love the humor that you used. Keep up the good work. And post another story soon.