I miss Gwen Stacy.

You captured this perfectly!

Great and Angsty. This needs a sequel.

Sad story, but it is well written.

Wow, I really love this. It's so emotional and angry... I hope Gwen doesn't die too! Isn't Peter already broken enough? You portrayed everything beautifully, to the point of me almost choking up. Fantastic job, and keep writing!

This was actually really good, although it follows comic more than the movie. A sort of "what could have gone down after the death of Gwen Stacy." Of course, we know MJ and Peter get together and contain a much more dramatic and angsty relationship after Gwen's death. Sorry for the rant, great story, though!