Remarque dans supernatural c'est normal mais en dehors dans dautres univers c'est des meurtres.

You should write a sequel! I would read it.

Sequel? I really like the idea of Neal knowing younger Winchesters and I'd love to read a white collar cross over with them...although I also wonder what Neal will think of Cas...

This has a lot of potential! You should definetly expand it

I would love to see more of this.

This could be a great opening to a epic crossover. Niel and Dean may not be cut from the same cloth but they are most definetly similar textures. I can see them getting along at a bar on a Friday night.
Though I wonder who they caught. Can't think of anyone middle aged.
Great job!

Poor Dean.

This is great! I'd love for you to continue or expand it!

What a great one shot!

It took me back to "Phantom Traveler" when Dean went into the copy store and came out with IDs for Homeland Security I believe it was. Nowadays its just flash the FBI badge. Still, someone had to make em!

"Neal still looked critically over the work. There were a lot of people who forged IDs, but few of them on this level and even fewer had such a wide spectrum. He also forged Insurances and other official letters. Neal didn't know what his Con was specifically, but he had never been out for money. He played Poker and Pool for that."

This is fantastic! I love Neal's observations and musing about the forger ie Dean. I especially like how he notes/remembers Dean played poker and pool to earn money. That is certainly unique for a con man making so many various IDs.

I also wondered about the man who was caught with the IDs...a hunter obviously, but who would Dean make other IDs for? Hmmm. A mystery! And a nice touch to the story! :D

Loved Peter's reaction to learning who forged the IDs too!

A couple suggestions/critiques:

When writing dialogue, keep it on the same line instead of jumping down at each new sentence. It can be annoying for the reader and also makes it harder to follow.

For example, when Peter's telling Neal about where the IDs came from you have this:

""The police found this guy and have him down for robbery and impersonation of an officer.

Then they found his impressive weapons collections and these.

Considering the quality I thought perhaps you know who made them.""

Try this instead:

"The police found this guy and have him down for robbery and impersonation of an officer. Then they found his impressive weapons collections and these. Considering the quality I thought perhaps you know who made them."

That way the dialogue is all together and flows. :)

This also goes for some non-dialogue. Like this for example:

"Neal remembered back when he had met Dean, years ago. Funny, snarky, worked a rougher crowd than Neal himself.

They had met through an old friend of Neal's who sold antique and rare books."

This might be better:

"Neal remembered back when he had met Dean, years ago. Funny, snarky, worked a rougher crowd than Neal himself. They had met through an old friend of Neal's who sold antique and rare books."

Of course this isn't universal and it all depends on content really...but I thought it was a good idea to bring it to your attention. :)

Overall though, a good job and fun story!

Thanks for sharing!

tehe very nice teaser of a one shot!

I love SPN/WC crossovers! So far all the ones I have read have been different.

I hope you continue this one it looks like it'll be really good!