Damn I wish there was more on this fic! I would have loved to see John and Jane realizing who the other is and read their first interaction. This is so well done!

Update?

I love this story! It is so well written, and you have a knack for knowing what parts of the game to leave out! Its refreshing for it not be a play by play of the game. And props for you effectively running two plot lines at one in a single story, the flashbacks are a nice look into the characters you have created.

I hope you come back to this!

Wen are you updating

Good chapter! I really enjoyed reading this chapter!

Good chapter!

MORDIN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE?! THIS MEANS THANE'S DEATH IS COMING UP NEXT, AND THEN LEGIONS' AND-AND-WHYYYYYYY?!
so like brother like sister, huh? (or is it the other way around...?) well, i hope it ends up all right for at least one of them. (of course, if you do the control ending, you could just have the reapers' make shep a whole new body, with his memories in tact, and everything. then we could have 2 organic/AI relationships...well, tali might have a problem with that, though...if shep is the one to go in this. but i guessif there's the "secret ending" to consider...decisions, decisions.)
tangent, sorry. anyway, i would kinda like to see more javik scenes, if for no other reason than to see him piss off the crew. still, glad to know that we'll get to see tali again soon. and thane, even though it will depressing as HELL!
update soon!

I have to say: If bioware disavowed the series at current and adopted this for ME 3...I would be content with that. This is an amazing story to follow and I wholeheartedly agree with the character development.

Please keep writing. I love this!

I know I shouldn't, but dam do I feel bad for Hannah. Find myself kind of hoping that sometime in the future they talk about what happened. As for the rest, I'm getting more and more excited now that Tali is getting closer.

The Citadel is waiting...crud...

Great Chapter ! Can't wait for the next update! :)

I have to say, coming in I thought this story might not be very good (for some stupid reason) but damn am I glad you proved me very wrong. I love the story and the characters. You're doing an awesome job! Please don't stop writing. Now I'm just sad I have to wait for the rest of the story. You're awesome!

Great chapter! And the story from their pasts is really getting good! But the current time in the story is also quite infatuating. Any who, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! See ya next time!

I'm so glad you didn't abandon this story. It's one of my favorites! Loving the chapter, as always. Hope real life gets better for you

CONTINUE PLEASE! :) AMAZING SO FAR