This would of been so much better for the episode. Great story.

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Amazing. I totally loved your version of this episode warrior. It actually better than the actual. I was expecting Lois to be jealous, but she wasn't. Shock that she kiss Jeff in front of Clark.
Still, it would be awesome this version actually happen in the episode. Love Chlollie scenes.
Thank you so much for writing this.

Crazy jealous Lois... This is hilarious...) great fic

Loved it

he he he he that was really classical the way Lois answered to Oliver's reply to Clark's kiss. Loved it. It was awesome.

I loved you version.

Your story is very good. But it missed one thing - Lois's showing Zatanna what happens if you are trying to steal her boyfriend.

You know, I don't think I'll ever get enough of your stories and one-shots. And I couldn't agree more with you disclaimer because it's absolutely true! Your retake on Warrior has made me one very satisfied Cloiser!

Honestly, I NEVER did like Lois' reaction to Clark's little confession. I mean, to lip smack some random person who just so happens to be Jeff the Intern of all people. And please, don't get me started on Clark's bland reaction to it either. It was just all kinds of wrong.

Also, I liked that you had Clois walking in on Chlollie during their shooting scene. I enjoyed the looks on their faces of almost getting caught. And assertive Clark. I always LOVE it when he makes an appearance. That little kissing scene in front of Chlollie and in the elevator was HOTTTT! If only we had MORE of that in season 10. *sighs*

I can't wait to see which episode you take on next! UPDATE SOON! :D

Oh I just adored this! I would have much rather seen the episode play out THIS way as I completely agree that I was left feeling very unsatisfied by Lois' reaction to the whole Clark/zatanna kiss thing. Especially the way she grabbed that random guy and laid one on him, IN FRONT of Clark; that totally irked me and still kinda does if I'm being honest...anyway, my point being that I much preferred your take on the ending of the episode. I hope that you will write more post-episode or scene rewrite oneshots for other Clois episodes as I really enjoy them!

loved it, that would be my perfect end too. thanks for sharing