Plz continue ! I love the story

That was funny Poor Peter he really is very protective of his family. Good jobSusan didn't know her brothers and sister where there, otherwise the Gentle Queen maybe not so gentle with them and peter would need Rhindon against Susan.

good job update asap

Loved it! As well as expressing the protectivness that older siblings have this is also really funny!
Thank you so much for writing it, it certainly brought some joy to my day.
Red xxx