Reviews for Best Laid Plans
Louey06 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Very nice story. I liked lestrade's daughter going ton get someone to help her dad, very cute. well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Loved it. :) Loved the background. Stories like this are my favorite!
librarywitch chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
I love the line "Why would we charge little you?" That was a hoot and a holler. So well done.
sniperbob18 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Vatican Cameos, nice code word. Poor Lestrade, but at least he has his gun back - even though he owes Sherlock, which could be very interesting. Great story, thank you so much for writing this
To-AntigoneEvenstar chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
There is quite a lot to love in this. "Why would we bill little you?" It's all really great, a really nice fic.
Lillkin chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
:) loved it - this was all kinds of awesome but what i liked the most was the banter - you write it like its so easy :) damn i would like to be able to do that - but really - it was brilliantly done - the easy familiarity of it so beautifully understated, it flowed so naturally, serious at places it needed to be; bloody hilarious at places you wanted it to be - thank you, i haven't laughed quite like this in a while now *sigh*

there were many lines that made me giggle - but for some reason this one(two) i loved the most :)

"Nice bed side manner, John," Greg whispers looking exhaustedly at his friends.

Sherlock huffs a bit before replying, "That is his nice bed side manner. You should see what I get."
- made me smile again as i was looking for it

and this would be the line that made me go all AWW and turned me temporarily in a pink puddle of fluffy goo...ehm, you know what i mean :)

"Of course not. We don't bill you. Why would we bill little you?"

the fact that its Sherlock who says that and the fact that its almost a word for word translation of an endearment for children common in my mother tongue ... just perfect :) so bloody adowabul aaaaaawwwwww
SeaStarr chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Wow. I could so picture John and Sherlock arguing with each other and ignoring the man holding a gun on them! Your dialogue had me grinning in so many places - especially the "He took your line" line. You portray these characters perfectly! Thank you for another great story.
spinner12 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Good explanation. Nice story, too.
EvilChick13 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I'm very glad that you decided to explain Vatican Cameos. This story was great. I really like how John and Sherlock like an old married couple. Its funny.
Arty Diane chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
That was great, I lovet John and Sherlock's bickering, it was so funny! I wonder if Donovan will "accidently" drop the suspect out of the window...
Prothoe chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
This was hilarious, absolutely hilarious! I had to giggle at least every five seconds;)

Precise timing, THE Sherlockian humour (as always in your fics) and perfect characterisations - and we got another brilliant story!

This was gripping and completely funny (yeah, I already said that;)) and I can totally see this as an episode on telly! And you revealed the origin of "Vatican Cameos" - nice idea. I'm already looking forward to your next story:)
tabbiecat chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Great story again. :) Thanks, Tabbiecatx
chappysmom chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Lovely. As a note, though, the piece of jewelry is brooch, not broach. (The latter is what happens when you break into a wall or a keg or something.)
Clara Christine Eveline chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
You've done it again! (I really should stop being surprised, all of your stories are works of art). That was a nice little case for Sherlock and John, you really tied in a lot in that short amount of time. Lestrade was also a nice character to have again, plus seeing his daughter was interesting. This particular story had exceptional dialogue too. It really sounded genuine, exactly the way Sherlock would speak. There was also some rather funny lines :D And finally, the ending was perfect. I love that the quote "Vatican Cameos" was incorporated in this story and explained. I love it when I get e-mails saying you've published a new story, they always give me a fresh breath of air from frustrating searches for good fanfics. ;)

Laura

(I've also changed my pen-name if you haven't noticed, though you probably have already, lol).
Flower in the River chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Aww, I love little Emily. She's adorable.

A little shorter than your usual ones, but still good by any standards. I'm really looking forward to Hunting in Shadows! (I forgot to reply to your PM, but you'll have to tell your beta that I'm in the same boat as her-John and Sherlock in h/c fics are probably my favorite :P)
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