have you ever thought of posting on ao3? it’s a way better site tbh

Agh this was my first story of yours that I ever read back in 2016, I still love this. Good job on it

omg get out of here with this gay shit. you ruined the show and all other fanfiction for me

Awesome i wish you made a second series all of them were great and i literally read it in 12 hours in 4 week differences I NEED MORE SQUEE

good job in this chapter

it really good halia and I like the way that Jerry has the dream of that and I also have the same dream and it was really good u did a great job to do this chapter

Ari
Female
Blue eyes
Blond hair
Hunter

I'm in love with this story! You have to have Jerry go back to his mom though and his sister and reviel it to them that he didnt die. Make him tell the truth before he says goodbye. Make him visit because its really depressing. You should totally do it please please please!

Yeah sure. keep it up

I'm confused are they gay or is Jerry a girl in this story

Honestly, i'm getting bored of this story now… i started reading a little bit of the next chapter and decided to stop reading…
i really liked the beginning when Jack was dangerous and sexy, and Jerry was in trouble but couldn't resist Jack. Now its kinda sappy and theres really no thrill anymore. Before the story was sexy and enthralling and i could wait to see what would happen to jerry and jack kept threatening him because of all the stunts he pulled. Now its…. idk… but now I'm like forcing myself to read the rest of it. Jack lost his seductiveness and theres less danger cause they're on the same side. and the story really mellowed out. and theres all these characters and its so light hearted….i feel like now that rudy is dead, all the problems are solved, but theres still six more chapters.
then again it might be my own personal problem, usually when the non-vamp turns into one, i usually get bored.
im not insulting ur work, i really enjoyed what i've read up till now, but i think I'm gonna bow out

i love(sarcasm) how u made jerry and jack have sex (or rape, however u saw the penetration) in like the 3rd chapter i think during one of jerry's dreams, but u completely cut it out when it was loving and consensual! i feel like i really missed out when u described jerry's pants as damaged beyond repair.

i love this story

I love the way this ended, though I an sad that its actually over. I'm emotionally attached to this story, it's crazy. I can't believe someone flamed you, because this is one of the absolutely best stories I've ever read. You're an amazing writer and I'm really proud of you!

that was a very cool story.