WHY IS THERE NOT MORE?! THERE SHOULD BE MORE! GAH!

Omg i LOVED this! Please finish it! Please write a conclusion!

omg this story is true awesomeness pls pls write more soon

I really, really, really hope you finish this!
...and give everyone happy ending. Because they deserve happy endings.
Love it so far, want to read more

Jiasgiagfbhdhdjsgfydyne Steve No! No! Omg got kicked rit in the feels and I'm in this glass case of emotion. Omg. You... I'm speechless. This story is really really good. Omg Phil. Omgomgomg. I seriously can't wait for you to update. Keep up the amazing work!

Fuji Yuuta-kun

Oh. My. God. This is quite possibly one of the best FICs I've ever read in my life. This is so great! Seriously, I love it! The only criticism I have is that I felt like Tony and Steve's relationship was a bit rushed, I would have had a couple of actual tutoring sessions before letting them get together. But really this fic is so beautiful!

You have Steve's character down pat, and I love your interpretation of teenage Tony. So realistic! And tying in his motive to built weapons was such a good idea! I love your Natasha. A lot of FICs make her character emotionless, and a lot of FICs make her character to emotive, but your Natasha is just right!

Seriously, I love this! Please update soon! When do you think you'll get the next chapter up?

Omg! Can't wait for the second chapter! This fix is so intense!

Holy shit. That was fantastic. One critic though. It's a little hard to follow when the time jumps. There isn't really any distinction when you skip some time periods. But other than that it is amazing and well-written, and PLEASE DON'T KILL PHIL!

Great story already! Please update soon.

like WOW this thing was HUGE and really good. ok sorry but i was a little confused about steve but more importantly- DONT LET PHIL DIE! other then that i really loved it and please post the second part soon! thanks :)

This story. AmaZing. And LONG. Took me all day to read!

I love it! I love it! I can't wait foe the thrilling conclusion!

Ahhhh, this was so fantastic! I can't wait for more.

This is awesome. Just pure awesome. I absolutely love it. And what a place to end the chapter. Its evil. Brilliant, but evil. I'm looking forward to the second part :D
I absolutely love how well you've written all the characters. I was a bit disappointed that there wouldn't be Thor/Loki at first, but I really like how you've done Loki in this and I've liked all the Thor/Jane bits.