Since I saw there was a lack in the number of reviews that this story obviously deserves, I've decided to just write you a really long one to hopefully compensate. The only reason why this story doesn't have a thousand reviews is because probably very few people would think to look up this pairing, otherwise there would be a network malfunction with all of the reviews coming in on this fic. the grammar and spelling on this was fucking spotless and I don't think I've read a Shirosaki this in-character in a very long time, which is surprising since a Wabisuke/Hichigo and Kazeshini/Hichigo are usually the type of stories you'd expect an amateur to write. And the metaphors were amazing that it makes me wonder how you came up with them. I mean, a voice "high-pitched and warped, like something drowning underwater"? That's awesome. When I saw "juju" and "kibosh" show up I actually laughed out loud, not just a chuckle, but a real laugh. I loved how believable this was. Unlike having him orgasm around the same time as Kazeshini like cliche' sex scenes, you made it super realistic that someone would come early for once and for the other to finish at all. Also, loved Shirosaki's nickname for Kazeshini. Cackles really suit him and it seems like just the type of nickname Shiro might come up with. Your tenses were in order, you didn't get carried away with describing how everyone looked, you didn't go crazy with Shiro's accent like a lot of people do, you incorporated the canon subtly but not excessively, and I normally don't like fics written in 1st person, but somehow, this was written quite beautifully with your magical author-writing-guru magic.

Woah, this is messed up! I like it. :)

that's not the end right please he gets them back!

OH MY GOD.

I LOVE YOU. Uke Shiro is the best and you portrayed him perfectly. I cannot get over this. This was FANTASTIC.

I hope there a sequel of something. That'd be awesome. FUCK this story was amazing.

I don't generally like first person narrative, but I thought you pulled it off well. :)
Excellent, sexy story. (Okay, so I'm a little messed up, so what?) I'm glad to see Shuuhei's ludicrously attractive and diabolical zanpakuto in a story, just effing peeps up with Kira's Wabisuke, the saddest Zanpakuto ever made.
Kazeshini's pants everything else!

:} I'm getting a feeling of sick pleasure from reading this story.

lol whats Shiro gonna do?
Is he gonna get revenge or...