I love the new chapter! :D

It's nice how Turles takes care of Chi-Chi.
These two are just hilarious, though! LOL!

I laughed so hard, when the Grshaw assumed Turles was Chi-Chi's mate!
Her reaction was priceless! XD
I wonder, if Turles told the Grshaw that, though!
I'm sure, that "errand, that has become necessary" means, he's gonna get Chi-Chi new shoes.
I bet, she'll be more than surprised!
I'm curious, how she's gonna react to that!

Daiz' and Bulma's date was lovely too. :)

Zailora though,...I think she was acting kinda foolish.
I have a feeling, that if she had actually tried to reason with King Yemma,
instead of being stubborn, or shown any remorse for the crimes listed under her name,
maybe at least her child would have gotten a chance...

I see Frieza is trying to get hold of Vegeta.
That's gonna be interesting! :)

hi . I absolutely love your stories

This was great, I'm absolutely loving the fluff between Daiz and Bulma, I'm kinda hoping we get Trunks sooner than we think.

I'm also want to see a Gohan POV because it seems like they're just chasing his trails of destruction.

Great chapter man

Haven't been around for the last few updates and just got caught back up! loving where this is going, and finally seems like we're getting to Namek! can't wait for what's next!

Great chapter! :D

I like how Turles is being rather nice to Chi-Chi.
Despite his kinda harsh way of speaking to her, LOL!
It made me laugh, when she wanted to throw his cape into the fire and the "breakfast" into his face!
Ha! I bet, that really wouldn't have been a good idea of hers though, LOL!
Plus, it was kinda sweet of him to drape the cape over her.

Turles' hunting- and survival skills are pretty impressive too.

And I think Daiz is right.
Turles wouldn't risk alienating Gohan.
Not only because he kinda likes Gohan and cares about him,
but also because Gohan has turned Super Saiyan a few chapters ago
and is now probably more powerful than him.
It wouldn't be wise to antagonize him.

Daiz and Bulma are cute together too. :)
Gartoas being jealous is kinda funny.
The guy has come a long way, considering he used to hate women a few chapters ago.

The last part's cool too.
I find it interesting, that Saiyans can communicate with animals like that. :)

Thanks for the amazing chapter! :D

Taimaz got better than she deserved. Then again, it is a little sad that she had the wrong version of the tale.

And Turles is going to go after the Dragonballs! An alternate Namek saga is clearly in the cards here. I knew we were going to converge to Namek eventually.

Daaamn, they killed them. Grimdark.

Little Turles knows, but these feelings are the key to unlocking the true power all Saiyans have.

hi again uh pls make more.i like this story please make more make 12 more chapters

My gosh, great to see you again. Hope you are doing better.
Yeah, Taimaz was Uber screwed from the start, I was kinda hoping for a more painful death but maybe that's just me.
Noo! Not the baby! Although, with the dragon balls, I feel this may be the start of a really great arc

Welcome back, hope you rest well . As much as I love this story. Your health comes first !

That's an amazing update! :D

I like how Turles finished Taimaz off quickly.
It shows, that he isn't the same cold-hearted monster, he used to be in the past.
And he cares about his people.

I feel so sorry for Daiz though. :(
I remembered the chapter about his past on his home planet long ago,
and I can imagine very well, what he felt like back then, and how heartbroken he felt in this one.
I agree with Turles; Daiz' world was really undeserving of him.
He's a good man.

I also feel sorry for Turles' loss.
I think, apart from Zailora's death a few chapters ago, this was his first experience with losing a loved one, being fully aware of the extend of that loss and what it meant.
But I also think, this experience was an important lesson for him, which will probably make a huge impact on his character in the future.

I always love to see, just how well Daiz and Gartoas know Turles. :)
When Gartoas immediately realized, Turles was up to something, as soon as Turles got the idea with the Dragonballs.

And Chichi's reaction to Turles picking her up was just priceless! LOL!
He knew very well though, why she reacted like this.
I really like how Gartoas wanted to safe her too.
I think Turles and his men actually kinda like Bulma and Chichi.
Well, apart from Daiz and Bulma OBVIOUSLY liking each other. :)

My heart dropped as soon as I read that Zailora and the baby had died, but as soon as Turles thought of the dragon balls I geeked! Loved the chapter and the dialogue as well as the showcasing of Turles agony and it’s effect on the crew. Also, GOOD RIDDANCE TAIMAZ. See you in the next chapter!

I can't believe, I haven't been around for so long! :O
Sorry about that!
I was having quite a rough time lately. :(

That was another amazing chapter! :)

I kinda feel sorry for Gartoas though, tbh.
The guy was just trying to be kind, but he pretty much always gets yelled at, or slapped,
whenever he makes clumsy attempts to help Chichi, or anyone else. LOL!
It's not his fault, that he isn't attractive. XD
But seriously, I like his character.
He's got a good heart; he is just not used to being a good person.

Bulma and Daiz are really cute together! :)
It's so sweet, how she's always taking care of him, and he's always protecting her.

And I'm kinda curious, what is gonna happen now,
that they are stranded on this planet.
After all Taimaz worked for Frieza, didn't she?
If they can't find Gohan and a way to get off this planet fast,
they might be in great danger...

Awesome

Interesting

Great