Hope u continue this soon. I have enjoyed it. Hope ur health is on the rise even if its a small rise its still a rise.

This chapter seems so unrealistic. There is no way that a kidnapper would get “parole” just because it is a first offense. Then with attempted murder charges included this is just so improbable.

Whatever Christian says about background checking every potential employee there is no way that the Hyde name would slip through without him being notified and certainly he shouldn’t have been made Ana's assistant.

I wish you could finish this story it was so good I need a ending . Thank you I really enjoyed this please finish

Great story really enjoyed it thank you update soon

Severe physical and emotional trauma will take time to recover and much worse when she does not want to verbalize about it. She needs to share more with Christian, he is there for her now.

Where is Taylor, shouldn't he be within reach when Christian goes in, instead Jack is given all the moves he wants to do.

Of all things that can happen she has to encounter Jack Hyde. Doesn't she have one of Christian's man watching for her yet.

Having a full explanation of the past night event cleared up the big misunderstanding and it should have fix their problem, but not quite so. At least Ana wanted Christian to hold her and sleep with her again and now he is going to see the baby's sonogram.

I feel like a child has written this story. Jumps from one event to another. The spelling, grammar and everything is just a mess. This story had potential. But the spelling, grammar and the ridiculous way of handling this story totally killed it.

I’m sorry, but I hope that you will come back and re-do this story...

He runs to Elena, the pedophile, because he’s a little bitch baby. He’s a piece of shit. An abusive piece of shit person that runs to his pedophile friend. If he doesn’t understand that you don’t run and talk to a pedophile about your soon to be child, he’s stupid as fuck.

You have a good story line but No one person has this much drama, this is way over done

Damn why can’t you let christian and his family be happy wow it seems you like to rune your peoples lives in this book. Please let them have kids and live happy

Please make ana less of a push over Christian treats her like she doesn’t know what’s going on She needs to stand up for herself

Ana needs to not be so forgiving he is a jerk to her a lot

The book is good I don’t think Ana should be so forgiveing christian has done some rotten stuff like sending teddy away without telling her. She is to forgiving