Great story. I like Eve and all but I want Louise and Floyd together!;(

I want Tab and Louise together so badly!

Goodness has it really been 2 years? Regardless, I am so happy you updated! This pandemic has been really tough but this update really brought me some joy! I really loved the chapter! (For some reason it wouldn’t let me review chapter 19 so I’m doing it on 18)

I was so happy to see you updated because Louise's story is really interesting and you've written this story so well

Every time I think of my own war series, I think of this story because the LI of my main character is modelled off of Floyd Talbert. Your writing is so immersive and incredibly fluid and I would give anything to be able to write the kind of natural and effortlessly incredible dialogue that you do. This story would definitely be one to continue, it’s so good and I can’t take the buildup.

I know it's a long shot but I've just found this story and it's amazing and I'd really appreciate it if you could find the time to update your writing is absolutely amazing

Just binge read (binge read? Did I just invent that?) this whole book at 2 a.m I’m immersed

hey, i just wanted to say that i love your writing, and i absolutely adore your oc. i really like how you spent more time than i've seen other authors take on the training (not to say that they aren't good! i think it just gives more time to really build the relationships between characters). and i also really like your writing style. thanks so much for writing this story, i can't wait to see what happens next!

You know, I actually really like Eve. She seems pretty cool and like someone I’d be friends with...which is why I’m kinda pissed off on her behalf. Like, Tab obviously has deep feelings for Louise—-and I’m not saying he doesn’t care for Eve because you can feel things for more than one person, but I think it’s wrong of him to be with her while he’s not WITH her 100%. I mean, the guys in Easy obviously know how he feels about Louise because they’ve watched the pair of them dance around each other for two years, but Eve has no idea, so its really not fair of him. When all of this comes to head, I hope she doesn’t let him off easy.

Also, I’m really loving Eleanor and George! Both George’s actually, but George Reid in this case. I really like how you do t just focus on the romance aspect of a story. A lot of fanfic writers do until that’s the entire story which can get kind of stale. Oh! Is it possible that Louise’s father had something to do with her being suspended? I wouldn’t be surprised...

“When he kissed her, a strange shyness overtook them both. Their noses bumped awkwardly, and she pulled away, laughing and coy. He laughed with her, and their eyes met as they smiled, because they were young, and uncomplicated, and in love.”

Wait, wait, wait, back up! How on earth is Talbert already in love with this chick? He met her twice and all the sudden theiyre seeing each other? Whaaaat?

Love this beautiful chapter oh please pretty update the next chapter

just happened across your story and I'm really really enjoying it I can't put it down! thank you!

Not reading anymore? Just for that you’re getting a follow. Congratulations on your Masters!

i dont know why you think no one is reading your story anymore. iam and i dont plan to stop until it is finished no matter how long that it takes because i realy do like your story and hope you continue to like it as well and not give up

Such a lovely update! I adored reading about Lou and her feelings for tab this chapter, and I especially love that she's been so kind to Eve. As always, your writing is such a treat, and I look forward to the next installment, whether it comes tomorrow or in two years!