Sorry, I didn't review earlier. I have to say it is one of the best i read.

Cool...

Epic

AWESOME job!:)

ok i have a lot more to read but this is good please keep it up
i espically like how you have added Mel and given Ivy a daughter i have an idea who Harley might be but i hope you explain just so i can be sure

This was realy good. Two face never really interested me but u wrote this so well he was entertaining to me for like the first time ever! Good job

good gracious who in the hell DOESN'T Jeffrey know? good mercy goodness in the name of all that is DC Comics! Holy populus Batman! LOL keep up the good work!

oh JOY! some Dee-Dee violence, i LOVE! lol and im very happy you have Melanie jump into the case, i woulda expected her to join Two-Face, not help Batman take him down...tho now im curious...O.O is Melanie gonna try to hook up Batman...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! guess i'll just have to find out tomorrow! LOL

sooooo sad...poor melanie smh. that is terrible - but i love how you really show the struggle that Dent is going through - the battle between good and evil, right and wrong, love and lust, desire and need...Dent and Two-face...alright i cant wait! keep up the good work, you are a great writer

u know, i don't think i could really put an emphasis on how AWESOME this is. wooooooooooow, so much action! u better get it! LOL and i love Bruce here. you really kept everybody in character with this. You rock. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

oh wow! this is really gud! you are keepn it filled with action, i was not bored not once in this chapter! and i LOVE the DeeDee action u got going on here. and i love how u kept them in character: totally bad ass chicks who can fight like there is no tomorrow, but at the same time can become very afraid, especially of the person they are workn for. u get it! i cant wait till i read the next chapter!

Great first chapter! you kept me reading with the action and everything. I'm very interested in the history of this character you have, and I love how you threw the Dee-Dee twins in here. I can't wait to read the second chapter tomorrow. So far tho, I am very pleased _

Love your stories. Keep up the great work :D

Very cool. The second half of the last chapter was unexpected.

Great story! I found it really intresting how you used quotes from the movies in these situatations!

Also I liked how you made it so difficult for the judge to decide wether or not Jeffrey was innocent or guilty because of all the good/bad deeds he did.

The relationship between Jeffrey and all of his girls was really intresting too. It made me really think how much they must've loved him to 'share' him. (The wedding was really sweet by the way!)

Poor Harvey had to see his son become what he once was; that must've been one of the hardest things in his life for him to see. Good job, and I'll start the second half soon.