Reviews for The Broken Fox
Cyril Kain chapter 5 . 6/30
Challenge Accepted
Logic Core chapter 1 . 6/29
The Namikaze weren't a clan, first of all. Second, I am quite surprised the Council hasn't already seized all of Minato and Kushina's assets, especially after declaring Naruto an orphan. With no 'issue' in the way, they'd be free to take what they wanted. Third, Anko's name appearing on the form would automatically call it into question, since to the council, she's 'Orochimaru's Anko.' Her signature would be even more poisonous than Jiraiya's.
Skylar chapter 5 . 5/23
I love this fanfic and i that my favorite cople narusaku and i like someone talk about naru and sasu problem in series because naruto more credit not sasu and sakura not being and useful in this fanfic is cool and not being a fangirl because someone tring to kill u and not give u the of day and u still loving is stuped and and naruto working and pleasing even almost geting for a girl and not get girl at last is stuped and wronge i think series is more sasu favor down naruto so i hate the series and like the story u no more naruto and what he feel his pain in heart and not stuped in the series and u are a great write and please write more story of narusaku
hendo2031 chapter 5 . 4/1
sad to see this story come to an end. it has been really amazing as you are a talented writer. if you ever decide to come back and up date or continue the story in the future those of us who enjoyed would be happy. anyways i wish you the best in life, and urge you to continue writing it doesn't have to be on here, but you have a wonderful talent for writing stories. as there were some parts in this story that had me crying. you do a great job of depicting & eliciting emotions. i wish you nothing but the best in life and may you achieve your dreams.
anonymouse47 chapter 4 . 2/15
PLEASE ACTUALLY COMTINUE THE STORY DONT STOP. I READ CHAPTER 5, AND ALL IT SAYS IS THAT YOU STOPPED WRITING THIS STORY... PLS CONTINUE IT.
I LOVE THIS STORY...
Reader chapter 2 . 1/17
Listen, Hinata is NOT that stupid. While it is true that most dojutsu users are practically deaf due to over reliance on their eyes, Hinata is on the smarter end of the scale and would have heard Kurama CLEARLY state that making those changes in a 'clan daughter' would have been very difficult, if not impossible. She even makes it sound like having bloodlines or unique physical traits, such as a Yamanaka's mind, would GREATLY hinder the demon fox six-paths eye (temp) and Kyubi claws being placed into the recipient's DNA.
Reader chapter 1 . 1/16
FURTHER! Naruto have NO relation to the Senju, at least none that he could claim. Mito was a distant aunt/cousin to Kushina at best. And as I said earlier, the Namikaze weren't a clan. Go look it up, no clan, so move on from that fanon bullshit already!

All Naruto can claim is kinship to the Yondaime Hokage and present himself as the last Uzumaki, and considering all mention of the Uzumaki has been erased, despite the fact that a large portion of Konoha's symbol is literally the Uzumaki clan spiral AND them decimating three armies of Konoha's enemies at the start of the Shinobi War, which is part of the reason Konoha even survived and won the war, shows you exactly how many fucks the council would give to that claim.

Face the facts: Naruto's ancestry means jack shit to the council. They already know and have decided that fucking him over is more important that preserving the bloodline of the Yondaime or the Senju's sister clan.
Reader chapter 1 . 1/16
Two things, one, Naruto never had a birth certificate. He was born far from Konoha, in a literally sealed cave, and his parents only set foot in Konoha long enough to DIE A FEW MINUTES LATER! There was no time to write one of those up, and they cannot be issued until AFTER THE BIRTH. Even if he did have one, his name would most likely be listed as Uzumaki-Namikaze Naruto, not Uzumaki Naruto, since the Uzumaki are a clan and Minato isn't from one, no matter how much fanon thinks he is.

Second, I STILL can't get over how FUCKING STUPID the people in Naruto are. Seriously, there was literally only ONE Uzumaki in Konoha that could have been Naruto's mother, and it was well known who she was married to, so how in the BLUE FUCK did nobody realize who he was earlier? Worse, there is literally a SHRINE TO THE UZUMAKI IN KONOHA! The people in the Narutoverse are dumber than concussed, half labotomized, extremely retarded lemmings born from centuries of incest!
Bookkeeper412 chapter 5 . 9/15/2019
Next chapter please.
JManM chapter 5 . 6/2/2019
Well, this was a fun read. Quite a few interesting angles on the past actions of the cast, and the emotions of your leads really came through. You had a great grasp on what causes those kinds of feelings. I hope you have worked your way through your own hardship.
Uzukaki chapter 3 . 3/30/2019
Ooooooh I love it!
Uzukaki chapter 2 . 3/30/2019
GAH! My heart! My heart is hurting. When Naruto broke down at the end and Sakura told him to let it out, I was reminded of Shikaku saying the same thing to Shikamaru after Asuma died. So beautiful
Uzukaki chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
That was beautifully written. 10/10
Guest chapter 5 . 11/25/2018
thank you for even making this story. i hope the day u choose to continue is soon but take your time. you did an amazing job. never stop writing cause maybe the source is to keep writing no matter if it is a different story each time. writing is path to your emotions, soul and most importantly your voice. dont ever give up. keep going. thank you again.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2018
I try not to think of Sakura x Naruto pairings at the age she is at now, but when she grows up into that awesome woman
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