ha know it wud serve Sev right if Harry got his kids to call him Mr Snape or uncle instead of Grandad. That's what Id do, infact if I was Harry I'd cut all ties with Lily and Sev they don't deserve him in their life they discust me in this fic. Who is Harry's partner?

Damnnn I liked Lucius more than Severus and Lily in this fic. And what the fck Snape? No matter what their parents did children shouldn't have to suffer. They are not and will never be their parent(s). And I also kind of feel sorry for James. I cried so much for this fic.

Done!
I really love the concept but this is way too short! Ot would have been better if you wrote a chapter for every year they spent at Durmstrang. I also would have liked to see more interaction between Harry and his siblings, how come they are on friendly terms with Harry when they see how their father treats him? These kind of things do reflect on the kids. Some more interaction with Sirius would have been great. Also, there are some things that don't make sense. Mcgonagall, for example, is way too professional to attack a student just like that without provocation. Harry didn't do anything to make her believe he was a liar and just stating that dishonesty is a trait of Slytherin is everything but professional. Besides, if she believes that Slytherins are liars then isn't that true for Severus as well? It would have made more sense if Harry did something that would warrant a misunderstanding and make her remember what Severus told her about his stepson.
I also highly doubt that Draco Malfoy would be satisfied with a teaching position; I expect him to go into politics and work for the ministry. It is also unrealistic for Snape and his horrendous temper to let his stepson humiliate him publicly by declining his apprenticeship offer in such a impudent manner. I expected him to slap Harry right then and there.
It would have been nice to have some sort of sequel where Harry or his child happen to find the letter a d Harry confronting Snape a out it.

I read this as well on Potions and Snitches. I couldn't stop. :) This was really good. :)

This is so sad.
I just can't help but think that Harry would have had a much better life if Sirius had remembered to give Snape the letter.
I don't think it should have mattered who his father is. Snape should not mistreated a toddler so. Lily's right she should have left him and Lucius and Sirius who suspected should have done something. All these adults in Harry's life didn't protect him, ugh! Maybe if he'd gone to school they would have noticed signs of abuse. Who knows.
Thank you for writing.

I don't think Snape deserves a relationship with Harry. Lily betrayed her son. She knew what Snape was doing and let him. Snape still tormented a child! Just because he now knows that child is his doesn't excuse him! He was and still is a vile person.

This was awesome to read. l beg you to make another sequel. Please! Maybe if Harry finds out that Severus is his father and where Snape tries to fix Their relationship. PRETTY PLASE. I AM BEGGING YOU TO MAKE ONE LAST SEQUEL!

And she's still with him, doesn't Harry mean anything to her? If Harry is Severus' real father why does he look like James?

Just amazing! Merlin! I almost missed the drarry reference in the last scene!

Excited to see there was a sequel. Loved it. Thanks!

This is why people shouldn't abuse children. i want to rant, but i rather keep it to myself. Watch out Snape, Your house will be burn by my own hands.

So sad yet so sweet.

That's so sad. It comes together nicely though. Well planned plot.

I really hated Lily... poor Harry... He should have hated her as well, what kind of mother stay whit a man like that...? even if you love him, you should love your children more... and poor James, I loved him

I loved this story, I cried all the way to the end. Lily should have thought about her son first, he was being abused, but No, she chose to stay with her sons tormentor. I think Harry should have hated his mom along with Snape.