It seems to be unbelievable that they could get as far as they have with no communication at all. They have barely had any conversations in this story, none that we are aware of anyway.
I am very disappointed that Edward drove drunk. I can’t even find the words to express how awful I think that was when his brother was killed by a drunk driver. More awful is that it wasn’t even mentioned by Bella when that’s how she lost her husband.
That being said I am still really enjoying the story and think there is a lot we don’t know. Still waiting to find out what Bella was fighting with Riley about the night he died.

I don’t know why they took all the furniture if they’re keeping the house. Besides the fact that their families and friends live there so they can use it when they visit. What are they going to do with the furniture anyway? Doesn’t Edward have furniture? I hope they didn’t take the bedroom set.

Didn’t Alice JUST have a baby. Baby Riley? And she’s flying across the country without him or even mentioning him?

Please update because this is a favorite story of mine! Please ?!

I really am enjoying this story!
I hope you will continue it!
Thank you

Just found this story tonight and I'm hooked and looking forward to more of it

Type your review here.I love the story and it's interesting but to short. Please add more chapters to it

Love this story...please update!

I'm really excited fr d next chapter and how Bella is gonna get through all this please update asap...

When is the next chapter due ?

it is beautifully written, update please ! :)

This is really weird...why would bella NOT dislike someone that has been cold to her for 4 years?
why does she fear the mother in law?
Why would she believe that shit about her having a good case against her? she obviously doesn't.
why would bella think that getting married would help?
OBVIOUSLY Edward could help her financially without having to marry bella.
this seems pretty fucking redundant...and marrying her husbands brother is pretty fucking gross.
That should be a line that is NEVER crossed. So I don't really get it. When Bella asked him why he wanted to marry her his answer was flimsy at best. He could have all that without marrying her, she could just live with him even. He suggested separate bedrooms, as if he doesn't want sex. So why cant they just live together? or hell how about this, he can just visit like a normal uncle. Its really strange that bella never said anything.
Also after over hearing that Edward loves someone, why didn't she say anything about that? Shes really going to marry someone that loves another woman? First off DUH bella...second why wouldn't you say anything? it seems a weird thing to NOT bring up.
I guess bellas ignorance to ALL things is rather fucking annoying and not at all believable.

I love this story. I know that life gets in the way of writing but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy and appreciate your writing and hard work. Thank you.

So many unwanted visitors!

I just read this whole story in less than two hours, only then to realize that it isn't complete. Gah, I so freaking mad at myself. I don't read WIPs. I hate reading WIPs, especially good ones like your story because I'll be so upset if they never get finished. Please don't disappear, this story is so amazing and I can't wait to see how it ends. Hope to see an update soon, but no pressure. I know how time consuming real life can get.