OMG! I love this fic, there just isn't enough Ethan/Brandt fanfiction ot there, please,please upload more chapters.

Have you abandoned this story? Because I hope not! I want to find the out the real reason why Ethan was acting like that! I love this fic so far!

are going to continue this story?
because I certainly hope so I love it and I wanna know how it goes on
so pleasseeeeeeee update .

Why did you stop? You abandoned? I want to know if this is a mission or not and why did Ethan behave like that! Please, let me know :)

(Sorry I'm french '-')

I really like this fic! Great writing, but I have to admit I'm a little confused... :)

Great story so far! However there are three spots where you should have used 'too' instead of 'to'. Also, I believe you meant 'restaurant' instead of 'restraint'.

:) Love!

*red faced, squeaks, dying whale noises*
I love you, I hope you know that

You are a sick and twisted person being so evil to William who has no idea what the he** is going on... and I'm loving it! Hehehehe (Loki's sadistic laugh) ;)

I have two theories about Ethan and this "mission".

Theory #1: There is no such mission. Ethan only made it up so he can get Will alone with him in Canada for some expensive and outrageous dating. He thinks that the only way to get Will to agree to go on this trip with him is for him to say it was a mission. Will can never turn down a mission, especially if Ethan is the one asking him to do it. However if this theory is true then Ethan has some SERIOUS ISSUES. All that abusive talk and pushing and pulling on Will is not a healthy or positive sign that Ethan is looking for a healthy relationship. Unless, for some crazy reason, Ethan came to the conclusion that Will is into the whole S&M scene or Dom/Sub. I wouldn't put it pass the guy who climbed eleven stories up without rope or a back up in case his gloves gave out (which one of them did) and then jumped out of the window with a flimsy looking rope that wasn't even long enough!

Theory #2: There is a mission. Ethan really did recruit Will to do a mission with him and for some paradoxical reason, Will lost all the abilities he trained so hard for. He really can't see or at least sense the men/women that are following Ethan and him. Realizing this, Ethan grew mad and became frustrated with Will. For some ridiculous reason, Ethan found it was okay and reasonable to punish Will by forcing him into committing sexual acts in public. Why he thinks that Will won't report him for non-consensual and improper sexual advances is a question that I'm trying to answer. It's not likely that Ethan would know about Will's crush. Not knowing about Will's crush on him, he'd be risking prison or even possible termination (by Will's hands) by carrying out such acts. So why did he do it? If he did know about Will's crush for him, then that means he reciprocates Will's feelings, which comes back to the idea that I posed in theory #1: Ethan has some SERIOUS ISSUES.

Despite having these two theories and each one having a possibility of 50/50 of being true , I can't help but think and feel there should be a third theory. I don't really feel that these two theories are correct. It's too simple. I don't know you as a writer but from my experiences, simple plots don't make a story. Most stories with simple and predictable plots turn into cliches. However putting that idea aside, the most plausible theory out of the two, according to what the majority of people think, is theory #1. It's probably the correct one. I'm probably over thinking this. I'm known to be a thinker who stresses over the tiniest details. Sometimes it backfires and I screw myself over majorly. Still, that third theory... Hmm...

If you don't update this soon, I will force you into a roleplay. You. Don't. Want. That.

Please please please update...i love your story and i have to know how it ends...please

Um, was it your intension to make ethen to seem like a raging phycopath? If so, congrats.

I like your plotline. I just don't like how creepo ethan comes off as.

I'm confused. Why and what is Ethan so mad about? -.- it's not like Will is doing anything at all.

I don't know what's going on but I love it!