~squeee omg I'm speechless your characterization of Gale is so spot on and I cried with Madge's story.

Loved it! Great work!

First you're not a terrible writer this short story was great. Second I love Gadge, I wish they would have ended up together in the books but at least we have fanfiction to make it happen.

I liked this, but the repetitive words (excitedexcited - random example) bothered me a bit.

Oh god, this is so amazong! There were little grammar mistakes here and there, but I loved both the idea and the execution.

Are you kidding? Not many people like Gadge?

On another note, I had that idea of Madge surviving the bombing as well and it's already been done (and so much better than I ever could). XD

One word: Fireworks!
This is what the fic was like: FIREWORKS! Passionate and angry and soulful and strong. I simply love it!

This is really good! I just wish it was longer!

i liked this a lot! thanks

my heart just exploded in a firework parade of emotions thank you for the tears

Wow - loved this one-shot. I love Gadge and have a particular soft spot for Gadge that is not AU. You did a great job with their hostile dialogue. I love when Madge called Gale a hypocrit. Then the transition to touching Hawthorne family scenes was great. Wonderful when Madge tries to leave flowers without being seen. The idea that the Capitol forced her parents to have her was very original. And also completely in synch with how the Capitol operated. I also am fascinated by the fact that she had food and money growing up (relatively speaking) and he had the happy family. So that just underscores the contrast. Then the final scene when they finally confess their feelings was, once again, very well done dialogue. I especially liked when Madge asked him to "just don't be around me for a while." That was heart-wrenching and very real. Great story.

actually your not a terrible writer at all your more of good writer.i loved the story

i loved this! You should write more!

Loved this story! I liked the way you divided it up as chapters and showed the evolution of the relationship. I also liked how they comforted each other at different points so that it wasn't one sided. Very well written. I hope you do more with these characters at some point.

toatlly a gale and madge fan!