when loki's invisible cock hit thor's face... you had me there. I burst into laughing imagining the confusion of thor. oh gosh! that was damn funny. :D

one crazy love he got there but I still hate loki great story

I'm all for the smutty.. but I'm too concerned with the plot right now. So, how will Loki ever explain Sif and Thor's dead friend? What's Sif's reaction to having being a slave then abandoned in the dungeon? Can Loki find a forget-me spell of some sorts to cure these issues? Will Loki have a change of heart and keep his father alive but prolong his sleep? Will Loki continue this lieing path and be found out... I look forward to reading more if you ever finish this.

Thanks for writing!

Loki has great concentration. I thought he would drop his illiusion sooner! _

Pleeeeease continue this story.. it's really good!
I would love to continue reading!

Think Thor is going to be 'a little' peeved that Loki lied to/fooled him again. I can visualise a jealous Loki sending the Destroyer in a future chapter IF Thor and Jane fall for each other (if Loki can't have him, why should she?)
A Loki illusion and real-Loki has a Jane illusion?

It's a bit weird but erotic I guess! ;)
Good job

Yummy...

Mmmm I love this.

so loki was himself with a jane clone wow if i was thor i would be i dont even no
nice jobs man im going to watch thor now

I just wanna say, thank you. Thank you for this wonderful story. It was everything I was looking for!

woo! i love it.

NICEEEE! Love it

I fucking love it!

wow. really good. :) keep up the good work