Whoa. This was deep and painful and beautiful.

This is so sad, really. As lovely as Serenity as, she will never be as beautiful soul as Usagi was. :(

This is an amazing thing; loosing oneself in the process of doing what is right. Deep and beautifully tragic. Well done

ugh this is super sad!

Awesome.

Really haunting a simplistic way.

Beautiful story. Very sad and touching.

Great story! A refreshing take on the whole situation!

Cute little piece. Trying to find the inspiration for my Haruka/Usagi fic.

I like it! Definitely thought provoking, and it addresses a concern I always had about the major differences in Usagi/Serenity. I really like how Haruka couldn't see the change that she was actually pushing until it was too late, just as she can't actually see that Usagi hasn't really gone anywhere. Nicely done.

Whoa...

Definitely a piece to feed your thoughts. I've always kinda wondered the same thing - Usagi/Sailor Moon and Neo-Queen Serenity are NOTHING alike... . It's hard for me to recognize them as the same person.

And I think using Haruka was perfect. I never did like how she and Michiru were characterized in the anime (I do plan on reading the manga soon!) ...

Interesting take.

THANK YOU! Thank you very much! Now I'm crying, sobbing, bawling, whatever word you prefer! I feel like my heart just got ripped out of my chest! TTwTT
Now that I'm through bringing that minor detail to your attention, I would like to tell you that your story is very good and that I like it very much. Normally if I read something that is under a thousand words it ends up being not good at all, however, you did spectacularly! :) Keep up the good work. Bye-bye!
Peace out,
Ariy-chan

Interesting. It started out as Usagi and Sailor Moon being lost, but it ended as Haruka not actually observing well.
Liked it.

oo wow my first sailor moon fanfic and that was intense love it repeat wow

Loved it!