Hey I like the story and hope that you continue to write more. I just finished reading chapt 4 and I cant wait for the rest. I really hope that Vivian isnt pregnant since you didnt say whether they used protection or not. Not that that would be bad. Also, I feel like Gabriel is going to die, now that would be bad, and I hope that that doesnt happen either. But other than keep writing.

So...what is the heat? What just happened? And...i'm madly in love with this story! :)

AWWWW! omg i loved it..what will gabriel do? how gabriel's pov right now? what's with these damn hunters? will vivian talk to esme and compare esme/ivan relationship? sooo many questions such a good fanfic!

plz update soon cant wait to read more

I like it so far. Please update soon.

KEEP GOING! this is a great start to a different type of Blood and Chocolate fanfic..i like it alot