Wow...that was awesone! Could you do more? You can do it. I believe in you!

HEWNOIBWIOEWBGIDOSNFKDSLNGMDKSLNFADKIGOBIOGBEOPGNEPFMRKGLNSKFLSBNDFJKLDSNFKLDSNGILRSIKGNRIGBWEIOHWEUHQEUOYQPTYQEPUGHDSULFJDBJVDSNJKVNSKVMKJVNSDKJSDGFDSHGFUIHWUIRTBHRGFDUYGFDYFEGFSNGSJMFISEMFESGMSGONSIGSBGONSDFINGIONRIOGNSKLGNRSGRNGURNGOIRGNLKDGNREKJGNRGLKSBRGLJE I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCH! I love how every character's portrayed. I love how consistent everything is with canon and everything you've added to it. I love the in-depth analyses of the characters that get thrown in. I love the bond between Heinz and Vanessa. And between him and Perry. And between her and Perry. I love the ways they support each other through all of this. And it gives me SO. MANY. FEEEEEEEELS! 333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333!

to be continued

Strange, I thought there was more story then this? Huh, guess not, anyway great story, very sweet.

The first time Vanessa did something evil lol. Ahh, I remember the first time I stole some candy. I think I was 3. I got some crappy candy though, it looked better on the package then it was really. And my Grandma yelled at me :(, first time I saw her mad. Also, Norm, get all those people out of their house! Reminds me of the Hobbit, when everyone thought Bilbo was dead and he came back to see his stuff being auctioned off. It's as if people are waiting for them to die to get their stuff. Assholes. Anyway, nice chapter overall.

"They chose the luggage. Obviously". That would've been funny if it hadn't followed such a horrible story. Poor Vanessa. And Poor Heinz. I forgot about this it's been so long since I read it. It was so sad. I love Perry's point about how a child shouldn't have to earn their parent's love.

I like how Heinz was just like "This America, in the 21st century." And she was like, "she wouldn't need an education if she had a husband." And I'm like, bitch stfu, just because you were never more then a house wife doesn't mean Vanessa doesn't want to be. But one error, Heinz said he hadn't talked to his father for 12 years, but he saw him in the fathers day episode of Phineas and Ferb (forgot the name of the episode). And they didn't hate each other. Sure, Heinz tripping and smashing his gift, and Roger's gift kind of undermined it, but they still talked ok for a minute. Also, fuck Sam, Perry the Platypus IS way cooler then him, Heinz is right!

It's a good thing that Doofenshmirtz stayed asleep during the visit. He's have been like "oh hey, that balloon looks just like Perry the Platypus", and Phineas would be like "how do you know Perry?" and Heinz would be like "he's my nemesis, how do you know about him?" and then it'd snowball from there.

Poor Norm. And Heinz, you should never use up your emergency supply stash, or you won't have it in an emergency! That could get you killed man!

Hahaha, Vanessa could beat up anybody she knows accept Perry, that's hilarious. Also the ending was really nice.

Well, that escalated quickly lol. And ahh, the BO-AT, memories.

Lol, it was actually really funny when Heinz questioned Perry about his family. "I'm going to assume you have someone, because if you don't, you'd be more lonely then me, and that's just sad." Say what you like about Doofenshmirtz, but he doesn't deny his short comings in life. Also, it's interesting, because most people would probably prefer to die a natural death from old age instead of getting killed by something... Or someone for that matter. I know I would. I wouldn't have time to say my proper good byes and prayers if I just died from a car crash or randomly getting shot or some shit like that.

I don't understand how a story can make you so sad and happy at the same time.

Damn, that evil rant though? Lol, Heinz would be so proud. And bitch, you do not throw away an OWCA agent's pamphlet! Bad things happen when you do.

This is sad, but the part about Norm is pretty funny lol. Sorry, I suck at writing reviews