This is so wholesome man. You make the mangaka look like a complete imbecile when it comes to writing out these guys relationship.

Mature Naruto is always an entertaining read.

This was one hell of a ride

Yeah... Sorry but your explanation doesn't work. Sure fighting without trying to kill your opponent would be more difficult but the difference in power between Hiashi and Naruto is simply too great for it to matter, Naruto is too strong for Hiashi to be a threat to him. Naruto can go toe to toe with people like Pein, you know the guy who destroyed Konoha and trashed Kakashi, the strongest jouunin of the village, like it was nothing. And Naruto beat that guy. Hiashi can be an "elite jouunin" if you want it doesn't matter. Either Naruto is strong enough to beat Pein and then Hiashi can't be a threat to him even if he fought without trying to kill or Hiashi is strong enough to fight Naruto and then there is no way he could have fight people like Pein. You can't have it both way.

I would love a sequel to this story

It's good to see that I was correct about your ability as an author and your dialogue has already improved greatly. My frustration can be buried and you can ignore my last review which was a flame even if I apologized. I'm sorry for writing down my frustrations and hating on you. Thank you for thjs story and I will continue it.

Bunta Away!

Well I'm again trying to restart reading this story but everytime I get to the fight with Hiashi I feel like dropping it again. The fight doesn't make sense to me. Does Hiashi have a strong enough chakra to penetrate the defensive layer of a senjutsu powered jinchuuriki. Hyuuga don't have strong powerful chakra because that's not how they fought. They're all about precision. The most powerful jutsus that they have are the revolving heaven, the air palm one, Hinata's lion jutsu, and Hinata's protection jutsu. Jyuuken strikes won't be able to penetrate through a of some type of earth jutsu and Senjutsu is much more powerful than earth. Naruto has the biggest and most potent chakra in the village, at least take some of that into consideration. I'm pretty sure Hiashi is not as strong as the typical Elite Jounin cause he's had to take care of his clan and regular training without actual battle will take his edge away. However, to contradict myself, Hiashi is still a pretty strong jounin, just not Gai or Kakashi level, which means a regular rasengan wouldn't have killed him. Not only that but Pa even said that Naruto has mastered frog kumite so he can properly control himself without killing another person. And you really underestimate senjutsu. Hagoromo was able to defeat the Juubi with Homura when he became a sage. Sorry for the rant but this frustrates me everytime cause it doesn't make sense and it uses the horrible plot convenience. Regardless of that I will try my best to continue with your story because I believe that you are a good author albeit with horrible dialogue structuring. Hopefully it'll be get much better.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

That was really good but I'm sad there isn't more.

Great job

I truly hope you get this. This in now the 5th time I read this story. And every time, I get sucked into it completely. I really hope one day I can read this story further. Please know you have my applause.

Great story. Hope there is a sequel

This story was great! I'm hoping that you will continue on with this story. If you are posting your stories somewhere else, please let me know. I would love you know where this story goes.

Plese continue further with this story as a naruhina fanfiction.

Another review. You do know that he mastered sage mode right. Keyword being mastered. He can control natural chakra to a higher degree than Jiraiya could. He had enough control of it to contain such a dense and powerful attack like the rasenshuriken. It should be easy for him to fight with just frog kumite. Why didn't he just use a regular rasengan against the kaiten. You said Hiashi's is much stronger than Neji's so it should hold up for a little bit against the rasengan. I'm sorry but your plot and your character development are both shitty.