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Excuse me need help. I did ideas giveaways which some of are Pretty Cure ideas on a page in the form of comments at this Wikia, All Anime Fanon and Fandoms and I want more people to see them and maybe adopt a few of them which my ideas giveaways are for everyone which means more than one person can adopt the same idea to do there very own separate version like for example, a series can be adopted by one person to do as there own version, the same series can be adopted again by another person to do as there own version etc. So I was wondering if you tell more people about them like on Fandom Of Pretty Cure Wikia etc. And/or adopt some ideas please.

By the way, the page that has the ideas giveaways comments on that Wikia is called Aladdin Monogatari.

Fantastic

How about you become admin and Bureaucrat of Pre Fanstar Wikia since it needs a admin and Bureaucrat since its been years since the last admin and Bureaucrat was active.

When I saw the leukemia part, I was like "God damn, not a reference to THAT Breathe fanfic that you make before..."

Great! It's so nice to see the romantic moments of Fuji-P and Nagisa. I'm also excited for Nagisa and Honoka and Hikari to get reunited again.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

N'aww, Roran is adorable!
The way Takezo's memories got triggered is believable since I know for a fact that folks in Real Life can suddenly recall major things if the right trigger comes along even though they used to be unable to remember no matter how much they tried to.
WOOHOO! The moment with Nagisa & Honoka is so beautiful coz of Nagisa's baffled yet hopeful reaction plus there's a subtle air of mystery.

I love the subtle inclusion of Japanese culture; it makes the story feel more real.

I love Saki, an' Tomo is great.
Buuut what I love most 'bout this Chapter is the human connections! *gives a thumbs-up* Plus Kazumi's behaviour varies subtly depending on who she is interacting with, which fits since people don't act with a sibling the same way they would with a friend's parent.

I enjoyed this Chapter a lot; it's fun! *grinning, pumps a fist*

The name change works fine.

Okay, I can't remember how the original started so can't exactly make comparisons; but the way this starts is good. The introduction to Elder, Queen & Mepple feels 100% natural.
The transition to Shizuka (at least I think the green-haired girl is Shizuka?) is pretty good, but a page break line woulda been good to include. She gives a pleasant 1st impression though so that's great!
The description of both Shizuka's appearance & nervousness flows really well! *grins*
*smirks in amusement* Yup, fun introduction to Kazumi & her family.
I'm enjoying Kazumi & Shizuka's interactions; they're very human yet entertaining, an' we Readers get glimpses of their personalities.
The fight scene is cool!
BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Hilarious call-back to the very first Pretty Cure Episode ever as the way to end this story's 1st Chapter is awesome.

"i can't believe this" kazumi is really a lot like her mother. i didn't fully read it just sort of looked at the words and scrolled down. also,why is honoka''s surname still yukishiro but nagisa's surname is suddenly fujimura? well,oh,what's an irisawa?

what a beauty. can't wait for the next chapter. update please!

Now I get it! I got confused that there's a name Reiko suddenly appeared. Not bad! Keep it up!

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If you want to follow the original series the monsters in Max Heart had a theme of rage and hate, if I remember correctly.

Splash star was nothingness and silence, I think.

Yes! Precure 5 greed and fear, while Fresh Precure was despair.

So why chose hopelessness, as theme for your monsters, it would fit with the others.

Cool & interesting Chapter, with shockers; I like Saki's POV most about it.

This is one heck of a WHAM chapter! *gapes*
Also, I like the characters' interactions.