Reviews for Balancing Hindsight or Foresight |
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Matt chapter 8 . 6/16 The books actually say almost nothing about Blaise Zabini. It's not specified whether or not Blaise has siblings. It's not even specified whether Blaise is male or female. I believe it is specified that Blaise has darker skin. But that's about it. |
Matt chapter 8 . 6/16 "standing in the anti-chamber of the Great Hall" Huh? It's the opposite of a chamber? What does that make it, exactly? In the book they wait in an antechamber, which is a smaller chamber off to the side of a large one. But anti means opposite. So what's the opposite of a chamber? |
csheila chapter 13 . 6/14 Good and you left it wide open |
csheila chapter 12 . 6/14 Very interesting |
csheila chapter 11 . 6/14 Cool. Great solutions |
csheila chapter 10 . 6/14 Better. I hope she has humility to apologize And Ron WAS out of line |
csheila chapter 9 . 6/14 Wow, Hermione needs serious help. I disagree she was this bad in canon. |
csheila chapter 8 . 6/14 Nice job. Hate that Hermione is so stupid. But story so good, I will deal |
csheila chapter 7 . 6/14 Loved the boy’s meeting. Nice to see Algie be less of a jerk. Nice job on familiars and wands. Great imagination |
csheila chapter 6 . 6/14 Curious why he is not working to free Sirius |
csheila chapter 5 . 6/14 Revenge so much better when it’s subtle |
csheila chapter 4 . 6/14 Best and most realistic ticking off I have ever seen. What is your conversion rate for galleons to pounds |
csheila chapter 3 . 6/14 Oh hell yeah, they want to work for Harry. Really looking forward to revenge. |
csheila chapter 2 . 6/14 Fantastic opening. Looking forward to rest. |
csheila chapter 1 . 6/14 Think Magic has a ton of apologies to make. |