You made Naruto a little bitch in this relationship! My god she had such a worse experience than him and hes such a fucking baby! Why did you write it like this, I cannot see Naruto ever being this Goddamned scared to admit feelings to someone! Who the fuck would be this nervous after spending a half of a YEAR together! It is completely ridiculous!

Can you not take the time to go back and add quotation marks? Its a struggle to read it without them

good story but too much anticipation

Oh my, I do love me some NarutoxKarin. This story is perfect (especially since their speaking is in quotations). I love how Karin and Naruto are both emotionally broken when it comes to love yet still feel something for each other. It's so sweet! I shall be waiting for an update.

I've stumbled upon this story ...and I must say it is a very good story... I would love it if you continued this story its well written and the emotion in it is perfect ...its a sweet story ... I love how kekashi made a funny joke about them in the kitchen ...all in all is a well written story and I do hope you continue this story

Their pace of getting to become a normal married couple is aggrivatingly slow! So many times I wish they would just cuddle! D: Its good, but I don't think I could handle much more of the aggrivatingly slow progression, can you have them cuddle sometime soon? *hopefull smile*

please update soon i like this fic

Another fucking idiot waiting for what? god blessings? stupid moronics teen authors.

Okay this story has officially become impossible to read. Here is the definition of something your story need's - Consistent Quotation mark's! -The primary function of quotation marks is to set off and represent exact language (either spoken or written) that has come from somebody else. -

At last we have some fellings go between them to interaction i look to see a honeymoon where they make a first time love .

Dear readers after going through your complains I acknowledged most of them. For starts the quotation marks which till now I seemed oblivious to have been placed in their righteous positions. I will never apologise enough for this carelessness I demonstrated however they are there I hope they will make the reading easier for you. As for the rest I pray you continue following the story; I'm coming around to that ( avenging Karin's rape). Thanks for all your reviews. I sincerely appreciate your interest.
XXxs

It is disgusting that three of the men that raped karin is still not punished or dying a painful death with their ball cut off. Can you at least avenge karin's rape. Is karin chakra still sealed. They know karin was helpless to the villagers with her chakra being sealed

Nice chapter. After 6 months how you could allowed karin's rapist go free. I mean come on now nothing was done to avenge karin being raped. I mean i,am surprised naruto is doing snything about the rapist

srsly? the "i was raped now im pregnant with the rapists baby" story crap is so effing played out... it makes for sub par story ta boot -.-

I am surprised i made it this far. conversations seem robotic and forced and with the absence of quotation marks ("") its hard to tell when someone has finnished talking and its extremely hard to tell who is talking. people will tell you that something is good but half will never tell you what you need to do in order to improve yourself. what i have mentioned is not a flame by any means, i have pointed these things out cause it took more time then needed to find where a conversation started and ended as well as who said it and to try and grasp how they were feeling when it was said. this IS a decent read but it just doesn't have that omf to keep people interested.