How horrendous, and wonderfully done! Horror to perfection.

It has been a few years and I hope you will continue another chapter or two.

This is a great one- shot. I hope you were more chapters.

Still one of my favorite oneshots. I recently watched Black Swan as well so it's all the more creepy.

It's been over two years, please update this story... P.S LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTT.

Wow...How quickly he succumb to the dark...

Wow I loved it

Wow! Tastefully written and very good in the way one chapter stories should be. With a gothic horror twist.

I love this one shot. What do bella expect, she should have keep her mouth shut about jacob and i dont blame adward at all. no need to expand it imho.

This is so beauitful. As soon as I started reading it I opened another tab and started playing where is my mind piano cover by Maxence Cyrin. The song just seemed to fit this so perfectly.

I like how you showed Edward's darker side as he fell into temptation. How ironic, he is becoming like Aro, the person who he was so disgusted by.

I hope you expand this piece. I was most dishearted when I saw that this is a lone chapter.

Are you going to continue with this story? I would really like to know what happens next?!

oh wow! i did not picture that ending, so good yet so dark. edward fell for his fantasy woman and wanted so badly to have what his parents have together, to be her knight. so he decided to keep her since she wouldnt stay with him if she was free. poor B.
are u gonna cobtinue or is this a oneshot?
great job mic! totally loved it
-roxy

Good start please continue. JW how old is Edward & Bella?

Please dont make him become like aro. If he loves her at all he'll let her go. Please make this her last dance. Is this the end though? I really hope not.

OMGosh! Edward has gone over to the dark side. Great job with this story. I love all your work. Can't wait for an update on CAM and LOMO.