Reviews for Pity the Child
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2019
THIS IS SO WHOLESOME
Athy chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
Sweet. I have a character who acts way too much like Latvia. He must have been so terrified he got into this state... because the 15-year olds that I know are 5'9, sarcastic, idiots, and just... stupid. Very, very, stupid. I've always wanted to have a Latvia pillow... nvm. Did you know that I have Latvia's self guilt too? Yay. (Athy is a nickname of mine pronounced A-the.)
animeduchess14 chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
This was absolutely adorable, and I fell in love with Ravis' character and how he was portrayed. Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
I wanted to say that I LOVE your FanFic about Russia taking over Latvia,Estonia ,and are a REALLY great writer!Keep up the good work!
Mondmaedchen chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
I'm loving it; you're one step closer to becoming one of my favorite authors!
daydozy chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
I remembered when I first read this story these few years ago.

I really, really love this fic.
Solar Kitty chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Aw, that was so cute :)
SilverMoon75 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
That was so sweet! I'm glad Latvia had a chance to heal while hanging with America. It was nice to see him be happy and relax for once. Absolutely outstanding job!

Sincerely,
SM75
OwlGirl98 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
that was beautiful, so sweet and lovely! Amazing XD
Meagan Snow chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Wow! I checked out your profile because you reviewed a fic of mine, and I am SO glad I did! :)
Your writing style had me hooked from top to bottom, until the very end! I especially love the contrast between Toris and Eduard at the beginning, as well as some of America's reactions to Ravis' behaviors (such as "of course he'd say that" in regard to Russia or "But don't worry, though! If any creep gets close to you, the hero is here to kick their ass from sea to shining sea!"). It's really neat how you weave humor into an otherwise darkish and emotional story. (That is, of course, meant to be a compliment!)

But above everything, I love your Ravis :') Poor kid. I've always been annoyed by the fact that okay, Russia pretty much has been treating him like a slave or worse for… 70% of his life? (Talking Ravis here, not Latvia itself). And what, now he's free… and he's okay?
I tried to emulate that in my story, but you're TONS better than me at that. That, along with the weaving humor into things… your writing style is everything I aspire to be!
I love this! I'm your biggest fan :)
Meg
AiLeiben chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Cute story. I very much enjoyed it! .
Slovenskych chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
THIS. IS. PERFECT! The feels are suffocating me! I love how you made Alfred very mature while still with that hint of childishness that wants to play video games and eat McDonald's. The comparison to England was GREAT. Raivis was so broken, it makes me want to cry...but his bluntness and anger for Russia is also there. This story is sooo amazing, and Ameliet is my favorite pairing so YES! Definately a favorite. :)
9foxgrl chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
so cute!
Mein Anderes Ich chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Stunning! Despite depiction of Russia is as a cruel monster, the story's really cool. Latvia's really nice - so vulnerable, unstable and distrubed, so i feel pity for the poor thing.
Thumbs up!
Mr. Lesbian chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
NOT CHEESY! I cryed a little when Raivis did...
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