Didn’t realize his wasn’t a chapter. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX

Time jump! I like that the three girls are so very close to each other. That is really wonderful. I like that they decided to stay in the space they were but, tearing it all down and starting from scratch. It does make me wonder why they didn’t just add onto it. I guess it was just more feasible to do what they’d done. They all seem so very happy. That’s what you really want for everyone. Love that Bella officially became Abby's mom when they married. I think that means she adopted her, as it wouldn’t be official if all they did was marry. I like that Rose rescued Kasey and got her a new home in Forks. Love that Edward got his old apartment cleaned up and working right, to offer her a place to stay with her daughter. That was very kind of him. And, they seem to be doing really well too.

I am surprised that Tanya suggested the termination of her rights. I thought that Edward would have to sake her to do so. Although, this Edward would never have asked her to. It’s best this way. I think Tanya is too wrapped up in Demetri to even know what she’s thinking anymore. At least from the brief bit of information from Zafrina about how horrible he is. It’s a shame that she’s being that way with her life. I would’ve rather she just decide she didn’t want to be a mom on her own, not by the man in her life telling her he’s not interested if she’s or a child. At least that’s way I read between the lines. At least it is best this way, to get Abby away from that toxic environment this early. I loved that Bella asked Edward and Abby to move in with her, when he was going to ask the same thing. Is there anyone in town that they can think of to work there? Is Jason's wife still looking for a part-time job?

I got the feeling that Bella is about to invite Edward and Abby to live with her. I think she really liked that they developed a routine so quickly. We know she is deeply loved by his family, as they all get along so very well. Abby seems to really like Bella, too. Very neat thing that Esme did for Emmett, having that red, white and blue party for him. Bella and her making all that food and the desserts together was wonderful. I’m happy that Bella and Edward are getting their happily ever afters, after having both of their hearts broken. Abby too, only she doesn’t know it because she’s so little. I was wondering if Angela's water would break at that party. Then she mentioned that she was having back pains all day. Eek! Hopefully, that is a congratulatory phone call Emmett is receiving. Would be very nice if it was a landslide victory too. Even though they were thinking it wasn’t with how long it was taking to count the votes.

If Bella has to do this every day, she may burn out. Doubtful, yet possible. It was good that Rose made that point before they went and got Abby. Edward should approach it as if Bella was never part of their lives as to whom would care for Abby when he has to work. And then, since Bella is very much a part of their lives, all the time that she can help is bonus. She definitely had fun with her in this chapter. I like that she asked the questions that she had to Esme. All her advice was good too.

I had not thought about getting Zafrina to testify. Smart of Edward to get her name and address just in case it’s needed. Strange that Esme would think that Bella and Edward had a fight, just because they were both tense upon arrival. Not believing Edward when he said it was something else. That was a great response from Angela with the gifts and the car. She was overwhelmed. If Edward moves in with Bella and he rents his apartment above the store, that rent could pay a part time employee's salary. Problem solved. Is it early on in their relationship to move in together? Sure. Is it uncommon? Not really. She already moved there to be closer to Edward and his family. They love spending their nights together. I think it won’t be long until she asks him and he agrees.

I’m just as mad as Edward is right now. Why in the hell wouldn’t Tanya just tell Edward she doesn’t want Abby, and to not bother bringing her back to NYC those few months back? She’s been so neglected. How awful. Edward has to make her give up her parental rights. Her leaving her with Zafrina, when Edward was there in the city, was inexcusable. What a piece of work.

I’m so happy that I was right. So glad Tanya is selfish in this story and wants her career and Demetri. You hadn’t mentioned in the earlier chapters that Tanya did not have Abby the first half year of her life, that Edward did. That should have been their clue and he should’ve asked for full custody then. I hope the new agreement has her forfeiting her parental rights. Edward would not be so cruel as to not let Tanya ever see Abby again but, him having all the parental rights would make it so only he can make decisions for Abby. If Tanya gets wounded on duty and gets a hair up her ass about wanting her daughter back, without that paperwork, she could pull her from Edward. They need it settled once and for all. I love that Bella is going with him to NYC. I also like that she had already decided that she would help Edward out with watching Abby. Rose was right in that Edward needs to hire some other folks. At least one that he can trust. With his apartment upstairs, he could always hire a person to watch Abby up there, while he works downstairs too.

I’m so happy she and Esme enjoyed their time together. I liked that she found all the items that she was hoping for the remodel/redecorating she’s planned. I like that everyone chips in and helps Edward at the shop. Even Bella did in this chapter by helping to stock the new shipment of books. It was really sweet of Edward to bring his little niece daisies, when he brought Bella tulips. She was so excited about her flowers and wanted them everywhere she was. Too cute. I’m glad they got some more alone time together. I am really hoping this phone call is Tanya wanting to further her career and have Edward take full custody of Abby.

He was sweet in waking her up the way her did. Would he like Bella less if she didn’t want to do the church thing with him? It is a big part of him and his family. I thought that they may stay the night at the meadow but, it was wrong. They had a fun day there. I liked that she initiated the skinny dipping with him. I liked that he snuck up on her in the water. I’m glad they had their first time there. I was surprised that he didn’t stay the night. Even if he had to work in the morning and she was going with Esme, it would be weird to not want to savor the intimacy they had that afternoon with snuggling into to all the nights for him not to stay. Strange.

It was as wonderful a date as I thought it would be. I liked the interaction with the fans of her series at the restaurant. They had no idea she was the author and the feedback was great. I rather liked that none of the staff blatantly flirted with Edward. It drives me crazy when that happens in stories, as that really isn’t normal for that to happen as often as the authors make it seem. Especially when they are there on a date. She was beyond excited about the play and that was fantastic. I’m happy that he had that last bit taken down in his head about Phil buying Bella off with lavish things. Making him wonder why Charlie thought that in the first place. I loved that she invited him in to stay after the date and they got too tired to go to the next step. I think I know what idea Edward just formulated in his head. He’s been wanting to spend the night in his meadow and she’s been there with him. I think he may be planning a night under the stars.

I love that most of this chaoter was her bonding with Edward’s family. Spending time with Esme’s to redesign her home. Time with rose to catch up. And, she got a lot of writing time in there too. I think this new life of hers if Forks is suiting her nicely. Looking forward to their date and her reaction to the play he chose for them to see. Knowing she loved the movie. What a perfect thing for him to choose.

I kind of like that they haven’t had sex yet. I love that they’ve been sleeping together though. I think he'll be moved in there pretty soon, just from them missing being in bed together at night. The part with Princess being mad at Edward for her being in the cage was funny. He tried to get her in there but, it was Bella that put her in. She was mad at the wrong person. At least he got her on his side again with feeding her pieces of his dinner. How does a king size bed fit into Bella’s tiny bedroom? I’m really surprised she is not using the master bedroom. Maybe they could paint it and then it will feel more like her own space than her dad's old space. It was so kind of everyone to help her move in.

I. Glad they managed to get the women to eat. Even if it didn’t stay down. It would’ve been worse if they hadn’t eaten. Gianna was great with Edward. I like that they got to know each other a little. Edward taking care of her was really sweet of him. I really liked that Princess came right to Edward and sat in his lap. He was accepted right away with her. How will he get his big dog if they’ve got Princess? It will have to be a small puppy so she can show it who is the boss, lol. I was happy you threw in that phone call with Esme. It showed that they were fine minding his shop. That they wanted him to be happy and he needed this time off. I don’t want Abby to lose her mother but, maybe something happens with Tanya's job and Edward ends up with full custody of her and has her there in Forks with him. Maybe she gets promoted and has an opportunity to do something out of the country and she can’t take a baby with her.

Yay! He is in Phoenix after all. Rosalie wins best friend in this one. She was smart enough to get Jamie and Vickie's phone numbers from Bella’s phone and had already contacted them to pick him up from the airport. Then she got together with his family and got him a ticket. Staying to watch the store for him while he’s gone. Yes, she’s fantastic. Drunk Bella tackle hugged Edward again. Too funny. I’m glad Alec was already there to care for the friends so Bella and Edward can run off.