Wow! It's 1am here but I want to read next part... Sleep will be hard to find!
This is just awesome!

I'm at the beginning of this chapter and I already want to kill BUGME! Can I just do it please?! What a SOB! When you really love someone, what is the most important to you is that person happiness! Even if that means you end up with a broken heart...

I haven't finish reading this chapter yet but MIC BUGME is really getting on my nerves... I really love hating him! Lol

I took the past week to read through this series of stories of yours. And I may say that I did not expect to be throwen into a world so easily, I have left exactly 10 years ago. I was looking for some distraction of the overly stressfull RL and somehow JAG still is my go to comfort-place - even all these years after it was cancelled. But usualy that world feels like a memory of past times.
Not so with your story. Your style of writing and telling this story is magnificent. Your choice of words is perfect in every single line. You draw a picture of the characters which seems so real. In other fanfics, often they seem to much like teenagers or are overdrawen with actions and emotions which do not fit into thier frame. In your story they just feel real. And not to mention your way of delivering emotions.
Oh and I really liked that you took an episode and built your version of the story around it. I loved that you changed the detail on how Harm was found, that you left out Mac's mystical talent; it made everything even more real. And I loved that you didn't make it easy for the two of them. It would have been to caricatural if there just was a happy end, if it was to easy because it was never easy for them. There are so many small, thoughtfull Details in here, I love how you let Harm call her Sarah and not Mac and the intention behind it, I love how you pictured Renee and Mic, how you hit the fine line between making them likeable and unlikeable, just to mention a few. At no point of DOALS I felt that one of the characters made a choice which was totally off for them; even those who were not featured to often in the show, like Harm's parents.
Although I know, that this is not the end of DOALS, for now I will stop reading here as the next part is still unfinished and for now this is as good as a stoping point for me. And I know this story was written over 10 years ago, but still, very well done.
A big thank for this great story, you are a truely gifted writer!

Oh wow! I would have loved to see the look on Renee's face when Mac said that she was Harm's wife! Somehow I don't think that Mic was all that surprised to hear this. I also love that Little AJ was the first to see the ring.

I am still immensely enjoying this series, by far one of the best JAG fics I have read. Looking forward to the rest of it.

So fucking good stor!

Wow, I first read this years ago and I was so pleased to see it had been updated recently, when I decided to check back in on the JAG fandom on a whim. I'm so glad you're finishing it off, as this was the standout fanfic of pretty much all the JAG stories I ever read. Thanks!

I love this series, after reading Through The Lens of Love, I looked to see what other stories you have written and began with this series. It has taken me a full week to get through the three parts. I noticed that you are updating a few other stories, SO I AM HOPING YOU WILL FINISH PART FOUR OF THIS SERIES. Here's hoping and thanks!

just found this story and liked it i was also wondering if the next part has been posted as i would like to read it please and can't find it anywhere

this was really good, so were 1 and 2

I've just read this entire thing for the tenth time and it's still as awesome as I remember! Did you ever continue it? Only I can't see the next fic listed in your user profile.

where is the other part? you are such an amazing writer! this is by far one of my favorites!

Is there going to be another part to this story because it is very good and I want to know what happens next.

Will you please update this story? I absolutely love it and think that it is horrible that you have kept us all waiting! :)

Can you please let us know if you plan to complete this set of stories.

I am a very big fan of your work and this story is extremely well written. I believe this could have been made into a feature length episode and wait to see how the story will end and whether Harm and Mac survive the pressure they are going to be under.