Please write more. So so good.

I really enjoyed this! I stumbled upon it after a google search. I know it's been a few years, but I would love to see the ending.

Wow first Myron fic that I've read and ... wow you did the series more than justice. VERY well done! Great writing, great depiction of the characters, overall just very well done. Thank you for sharing your take on this world. :)

Extremely well written and accurately portrayed characters. I've been following this since the first chapter was written on this site. Then I read the second a while back. I came back today to read more hoping there was more of it written. Is there going to be more on this?

It has been ages and still no update. I just re-read this again and it showed so much promise and potential! Please do write a new chapter. I hope you really can update this :)

Good work I'd say :)

This is amazing. You captured the humor and the darkness in the way Coben weaves the characterization of Myron and Win and the intricate mystery they're going to solve. Please keep writing. There are only 6 stories in this category but I'm happy that yours is the one that has most promise and is very well-written. I literally hunger for more. I hope you update soon!

I like this addition to the story. The characters reactions were spot on. On to chapter 3.

This chapter was better than I thought it would be. Great answer to the mystery. Win and Myron being themselves. Now I am looking for to seeing Win do what he does. I love the little tension between Myron and Win that lasted for just a moment. I am an angst junkie. Right now Win is my flavor of the month. He has been for a couple of years. No one handles angst like he does.

Thanks for updating, I love this. Cant wait for next one :D

This story could be entitled the best of Win and Myron. You capture everything that makes them my favorite fictional duo. Each character is spot on, even Esperanza.

Now we need to get the mystery solved. It is such a great one. I am really looking forward to seeing where you will take this story. Please don't leave us hanging.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thankyou.

I like the way you adopted Coben's style of writing. You capture the essense of the characters story is mysterious and intriguing. I do hope that you solve the mystery soon. It is a great hook.

And yes, I will be reading all that you write.

I like it. And you did a great job. I hope to see more :D